Question

【題目】5月5日，張學(xué)友（Jacky Cheung）終于來?yè)P(yáng)州了，人氣爆棚。針對(duì)當(dāng)前中學(xué)生中的追星現(xiàn)象，你班同學(xué)展開了一次熱烈的討論，有很多同學(xué)贊同，也有不少同學(xué)反對(duì)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表中的提示寫一篇英語短文，介紹討論的情況。

贊同	反對(duì)
◇學(xué)習(xí)負(fù)擔(dān)重,需要娛樂放松。	◇自控力不強(qiáng)，導(dǎo)致無法專注學(xué)習(xí)。
◇豐富活動(dòng)，充實(shí)課余生活。	◇消耗精力，不利于身心健康發(fā)展。
◇了解明星，學(xué)習(xí)優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)。	◇浪費(fèi)金錢，給父母帶來經(jīng)濟(jì)壓力。
◇你的看法：……

注意：1. 對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2. 字?jǐn)?shù)150左右。短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：追星star worshiping

On May 5th, Jacky Cheung came to Yangzhou, bursting with popularity. Recently, your class has held a heated discussion about the phenomenon of star worshiping. The opinions are different.

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Answer 1

【答案】On May 5th, Jacky Cheung came to Yangzhou, bursting with popularity. Recently, your class has held a heated discussion about the phenomenon of star worshiping. The opinions are different.

Some students are in favor of star worshiping. Nowadays, students bear heavy study burden and require necessary entertainment and relaxation. Students’ spare time can be made full use of and star worshiping can enrich our activities. Besides, we can know about the stars further and learn some excellent qualities from them.

On the other hand, others hold the opposite view. Lack of self-control makes students unable to concentrate on study. Star worshiping consumes too much energy, which is not beneficial to students’ physical and mental development. In addition, it is a waste of money and might cause economic pressure on parents.

Personally, star worshiping is acceptable. However, we should make it clear who are the real “heroes”. The real heroes are those who are making the most contributions to our society. As middle school students, we ought to learn from them. Only in this way can we become useful persons in the future.

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文。針對(duì)當(dāng)前中學(xué)生中的追星現(xiàn)象，你班同學(xué)展開了一次熱烈的討論，有很多同學(xué)贊同，也有不少同學(xué)反對(duì)。第一段文章已經(jīng)給出，是引出話題的，第2段給出一些同學(xué)贊同，也有不少同學(xué)反對(duì)的理由。最后一段應(yīng)該給出自己的看法和觀點(diǎn)。

文章內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出。但考生在寫這篇文章時(shí)，要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：

1. 文章是對(duì)某個(gè)話題進(jìn)行議論，一般以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。

2. 要點(diǎn)要齊全。但是不要對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單的羅列。可以使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，使上下文行文流暢，銜接自然流暢。

3. 注意文章要以一定的邏輯順序進(jìn)行敘述，一定要把各方觀點(diǎn)敘述清楚，細(xì)節(jié)把控要到位。否則會(huì)顯得說服力不夠，內(nèi)容不夠豐滿。

【范文亮點(diǎn)】

優(yōu)秀詞匯和短語： in favor of 支持，bear heavy study burden承擔(dān)著繁重的學(xué)習(xí)負(fù)擔(dān)，be made full use of被充分利用，enrich使豐富，concentrate on專注于，Lack of self-control缺乏自我控制，be beneficial to 對(duì) ...有益，ought to 應(yīng)該。

優(yōu)秀句式和行文脈絡(luò)：

1.Students’ spare time can be made full use of and star worshiping can enrich our activities. 這里用一個(gè)and并聯(lián)了兩個(gè)句子，一個(gè)被動(dòng)一個(gè)主動(dòng)，且主語不同，單是他們都是表達(dá)追星的好處，這里句式豐富，觀點(diǎn)鮮明。

2.全文運(yùn)用了Besides，On the other hand，In addition，Personally，However這些連接詞是行文流暢。而且全文邏輯清晰，觀點(diǎn)鮮明，最后還闡述了自己的觀點(diǎn)，作為一篇議論文，這些細(xì)節(jié)處理的很好。