Question

16．請寫一篇短文，闡述水在人們生活中的重要性以及如何解決缺水問題．
1、沒有水，人與動物怎么辦？
2、缺水問題越來越嚴(yán)重．原因是人口增長；工、農(nóng)業(yè)發(fā)展；污染．
3、應(yīng)采取措施，解決缺水問題；充分利用；避免污染；凈化雨水或海水．
詞數(shù)：120左右
生詞：凈化purify；缺水water shortage；污染pollute；采取措施take measures； 工業(yè)industry
注意：
1．包括以上要點．
2．不要逐字逐條翻譯，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)．
3．字?jǐn)?shù)120詞左右．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一篇短文，闡述水在人們生活中的重要性以及如何解決缺水問題．寫作要點包括：1、沒有水，人與動物怎么辦？2、缺水問題越來越嚴(yán)重．原因是人口增長；工、農(nóng)業(yè)發(fā)展；污染．3、應(yīng)采取措施，解決缺水問題；充分利用；避免污染；凈化雨水或海水．寫作時人稱以第一和第三人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．
重點詞匯：hot issue（熱點問題）；pay attention to （注意）；lead to（導(dǎo)致）；be worth doing（值得做…）；take measures（采取措施）；play an important role（騎著重要作用）；make good use of （充分利用）
高分句型：1．It's generally believed that humans should pay much attention to the water problem．
                 在這個固定句型中，it作形式主語，真正的主語是后面的that從句．
                 2．Thus，how to solve such a serious problem is indeed worth paying more attention．
                  how to solve such a serious problem 是一個主語從句，作句子的主語．
                 3．It's high time that we should take some effective and immediate measures to solve it．
                  It's high time that…句型，意為（是時候…），that從句用虛擬語氣"should+動詞原形"．

解答 Lately，the importance of water and the water shortage problem have become a hot issue．It's generally believed that humans should pay much attention to the water problem（高分句型一）．開門見山，提出問題
Water is very important to living things．Without water，there would be no life on earth．All animals and plants need water．Man also needs water．
Recently，as the population of the world is growing rapidly，using much water is a must．The development of agriculture and industry leads to water pollution．Thus，how to solve such a serious problem is indeed worth paying more attention（高分句型二）．
As a saying goes，small actions make a big difference．It's high time that we should take some effective and immediate measures to solve it（高分句型三）．First，raising the public awareness plays an important role in solving the problem．Besides，we should make good use of water and prevent water from being polluted．Meanwhile，we can purify rainwater and sea water（需要采取的措施）．
It's better late than never．Faced with the water problem，we should work together to protect our water resource and save every drop of water．發(fā)出倡議

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意要點的提煉要全，關(guān)鍵短語和句型要寫對，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，還要注意人稱和時態(tài)使用要正確．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．