Question

17．你們學校正在進行英語演講比賽，題目為"If I were…"．請你以此為題寫一篇英語演講稿，參加這次比賽．
內(nèi)容：
1．選擇你喜歡的（一種職業(yè)、一個人物）；
2．說明你的選擇理由．
注意：
詞數(shù)：100-120，文章開頭與結(jié)尾已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）；
Good morning，everyone，                                                           
Thanks for your listening．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息以"If I were…"為題寫一篇英語演講稿，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：選擇你喜歡的（一種職業(yè)、一個人物）；說明你的選擇理由．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：The reason why I choose to be a dustman is that I want to make our city a more beautiful place to live．（高分句型一）句中使用了The reason why…is that…句式，其中why引導的是定語從句，that引導的是表語從句
I would tell others that we dustmen can also make a great difference to our society by performing our jobs well．（高分句型二）句中that引導的是賓語從句，作tell的賓語
  No matter what you do，it is important that you do it well and it is worth doing as long as you consider it valuable．（高分句型三）句中no matter what屬于讓步狀語從句，that為主語從句，as long as 引導的是條件狀語從句

解答 Good morning，everyone，
     I'm glad to stand here to give a speech．My topic today is"If I were a dustman"．
     Perhaps you are surprised at my choice，but I do think being a dustman is a great choice．The reason why I choose to be a dustman is that I want to make our city a more beautiful place to live．（高分句型一）If I were a dustman，I would make our city cleaner with no rubbish lying on the street．I would tell others that we dustmen can also make a great difference to our society by performing our jobs well．（高分句型二）
     No matter what you do，it is important that you do it well and it is worth doing as long as you consider it valuable．（高分句型三）
     Thanks for your listening．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．