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17．隨著年齡的增長，我們總想掙脫父母的懷抱，漸漸和父母產(chǎn)生分歧．假設(shè)你是李華，某中學(xué)英語雜志社正在開展題為"How to get along well with your parents"的征文活動．請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇征文稿．
1．事前要跟父母溝通，征求他們的建議；
2．跟父母意見不一致時要保持冷靜；
3．多花時間跟父母在一起，跟他們一塊郊游等．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：120左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
How to get along well with your parents                                       

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知人稱可以用第一或第二人稱，時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容分成兩部分：一 點(diǎn)明主題；二和父母相處的方法，這是文章的主體，包括跟父母意見不一致時要保持冷靜；多花時間跟父母在一起，跟他們一塊郊游等．
高分句型：
1．This way you will be able to tell what they will say yes or no before you make plans．what引導(dǎo)賓語從句．
用這種方式，在你做計(jì)劃之前，你就能夠判斷出什么事他們會同意，什么事他們不同意．
2．You'd better listen to what they have to say instead of quarreling with them．what引導(dǎo)賓語從句，instead of 表示"而不是"，介詞of后用doing．
你最好聽他們說的事而不是和他們爭吵．

解答 As you are growing，you may want to be free from your parents and feel ready to make your own decisions．However，your parents will disagree with you．Your relationship with your parents may be in trouble right now．Here are some tips for you to avoid quarrels with your parents（點(diǎn)明主題）．
Discuss the rules ahead of time and not at the last minute．This way you will be able to tell what they will say yes or no before you make plans【高分句型一】．Try to remain calm when your parents say no to something．You'd better listen to what they have to say instead of quarreling with them【高分句型二】．Spend time with your family．Communicate with each other at home．Suggest activities that your whole family will enjoy together such as going for a hike，a bike ride，or going to the beach．（和父母相處的方法）

點(diǎn)評 提綱類作文往往會給出內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，因?yàn)橹皇翘峋V，所以要根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)．語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔