Question

1．假設(shè)你是李華，你校英文報(bào)舉辦有關(guān)因特網(wǎng)的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要求，寫一篇短文，提出你對(duì)如何使用因特網(wǎng)的看法．
要求：
1．合理使用（看新聞、交際、查信息；限制時(shí)間）；
2．避免的事情（玩游戲、浪費(fèi)時(shí)間、影響學(xué)習(xí)）．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100詞左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Nowadays the Internet brings great convenience to us．We should make the most of it and use it wisely．We can be aware of what happens both at home and abroad through the Internet．（高分句型一）We can also communicate with others，using the Internet．In our studies，we can obtain almost all the information from it．But remember：we should limit our time to use the Internet．
Everything has two sides．It is obvious that the Internet has several disadvantages，which can cause serious problems．（高分句型二）Therefore，we mustn't devote too much time to playing online games，only to waste our precious time and affect our studies!（高分句型三）All in all，we had better make use of the Internet wisely and make it help us．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假設(shè)你是李華，你校英文報(bào)舉辦有關(guān)因特網(wǎng)的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要求，寫一篇短文，提出你對(duì)如何使用因特網(wǎng)的看法，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：合理使用（看新聞、交際、查信息；限制時(shí)間）；避免的事情（玩游戲、浪費(fèi)時(shí)間、影響學(xué)習(xí)）．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：make the most of 充分利用；be aware of 意識(shí)到；at home and abroad在國內(nèi)外；First of all首先；devote to致力于；
We can be aware of what happens both at home and abroad through the Internet．（高分句型一）
It is obvious that the Internet has several disadvantages，which can cause serious problems．（高分句型二）Therefore，we mustn't devote too much time to playing online games，only to waste our precious time and affect our studies!（高分句型三）

解答 Nowadays the Internet brings great convenience to us．We should make the most of it and use it wisely．We can be aware of what happens both at home and abroad through the Internet．（高分句型一）We can also communicate with others，using the Internet．In our studies，we can obtain almost all the information from it．But remember：we should limit our time to use the Internet．
       Everything has two sides．It is obvious that the Internet has several disadvantages，which can cause serious problems．（高分句型二）Therefore，we mustn't devote too much time to playing online games，only to waste our precious time and affect our studies!（高分句型三）All in all，we had better make use of the Internet wisely and make it help us．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．