Question

【題目】“中國夢”代表每個中國人的夢想。作為中學生，你對未來有怎樣的憧憬？對人生有怎樣的期盼？請你圍繞“夢想”這一話題，根據提示信息寫一篇英語短文。

內容要點提示：

1．我的夢想是什么？

2．我為什么有這樣的夢想？

3．我將怎樣實現(xiàn)我的夢想？

注意：

1．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名、地名和校名。

2．短文須包含提示內容，可適當發(fā)揮。

3．100詞左右，開頭和結尾已給出，不計人總詞數(shù)。

4．提示詞匯：achieve one's dream, hold on to, difficulty, give up

China dreams are made up of all Chinese people's dreams. As a middle school student, what's my dream？

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If everyone does so, I strongly believe our China dreams must come true and China will get better and better.

Answer 1

【答案】

China dreams are made up of all Chinese people's dreams. As a middle school student, what's my dream?

I dream of becoming a teacher when I grow up, and I hope to work in my old school. Because I want to reward my teachers for teaching me so well. I'll also try my beat to teach my students as my teachers taught me. To achieve my dream, I'll have to study harder from now on. I'll never give up my dream no matter what difficulties I meet. I'm sure my dream will come true as long as I hold on to it.

If everyone does so, I strongly believe our China dreams must come true and China will get better and better.

【解析】

試題分析：考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語dream of 夢想；try one’s best to do 竭盡全力做某事；achieve one’s dream實現(xiàn)某人的夢想；To achieve my dream, I'll have to study harder from now on.這個句子to achieve my dream做目的狀語；I'll never give up my dream no matter what difficulties I meet這個句子no matter what引導讓步狀語從句；