Question

假如你叫李華，你的朋友Jenny來信向你詢問如何保持健康。請你給他發(fā)一封E-mail提些建議。內(nèi)容要點如下：

1. 注意合理飲食,多吃水果蔬菜；

2. 保證充足睡眠，至少8小時；

3. 堅持鍛煉身體，多參加體育運動。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增添細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.郵件的開頭結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Jenny,

How nice to hear from you! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. I would like to give you some advice.

Yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Jenny,

How nice to hear from you! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. I would like to give you some advice. We know, food is of great important to us teenagers. Since we grow very fast , we are in need of nutritious food , such as fresh vegetables, fruits, fish, meat and so on. However, I think you’d better not eat food with much sugar and fat. And you should get plenty of sleep, which is necessary for you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day. In addition, you should take physical exercise regularly. It will be beneficial to your health. Only in this way can you keep fit.

Best wishes!

【解析】

試題分析：假如你叫李華，你的朋友Jenny來信向你詢問如何保持健康。請你給他發(fā)一封E-mail提些建議。內(nèi)容要點如下：1. 注意合理飲食,多吃水果蔬菜；2. 保證充足睡眠，至少8小時；3. 堅持鍛煉身體，多參加體育運動。要把所提示的點寫全，把漢語翻譯成通順的英語句子，可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，寫作時要注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩，注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)在100詞左右，不要太多或太少。郵件的開頭結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

【亮點說明】How nice to hear from you!句中使用了感嘆句；In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy.句中運用了疑問詞加動詞不定式作賓語；Since we grow very fast , we are in need of nutritious food , such as fresh vegetables, fruits, fish, meat and so on.此句包含一個Since引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句；However, I think you’d better not eat food with much sugar and fat.句中含有一個賓語從句；And you should get plenty of sleep, which is necessary for you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day.句中包含了一個which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句；Only in this way can you keep fit.此句是一個倒裝句，運用的非常到位，為文章增光添彩。

考點：考查郵件式的話題作文。