Question

請仔細閱讀下面所給的英文信，然后給Worried寫一封回信。
Dear Helpful,
I’m a middle school student and I’m in trouble. I used to like English, but now I have some difficulty in English, especially in English writing. Though I know English is a very important subject, I think now it is too difficult for me. You know I have got poor results in English tests many times because my writing is poor. I wonder why so many students like English and can get good results in English tests. I do want to be one of the best students and go to a famous university after graduation. But my English is not good enough. What should I do?
Worried
回信包含以下內(nèi)容：
1. 要有自信心；
2. 多記一些慣用詞組 (set phrases) 和句型結(jié)構(gòu) (sentence structures)，多造句；
3. 大量閱讀可以提高寫作水平；          4. 多背誦一些好的短文；
5. 寫日記是提高寫作的好方法；          6. 要經(jīng)常練習。
要求：
1.至少寫出五項內(nèi)容；               2.開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
3.不要逐字逐條翻譯，可以適當增加細節(jié)，詞數(shù)100—120左右。
Dear Worried,
I have received your letter and I’m glad to give you some suggestions.
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Follow your dream and you’ll find success is just around the corner!Good luck to you in your writing.                                    

Answer 1

Dear Worried,
I have received your letter and I’m glad to give you some suggestions.
First of all, don’t be disappointed. Many students find it difficult to write well. In my opinion, if you want to improve your writing, you can do several things.
To begin with, do some study with set phrases and sentence structures. Keep a list of them and make some sentences with them. And, in order to write well, you must learn to read much, which will contribute to building your vocabulary and help to better your writing skills. Besides, you’d better recite some good passages, where you can enjoy many beautiful sentences and learn some useful expressions. What’s more, keeping a diary is an effective way. You can have a try without delay and it’s necessary to practice writing as often as possible. Follow your dream and you’ll find success is just around the corner! Good luck to you in your writing.
Helpful

本文對考生的要求較高，要求考生首先讀懂原文，再根據(jù)文字提示寫作。原文是一位在英文寫作方面遇見困難的學生在尋求幫助。回信的要點都已經(jīng)給了出來，考生需要使用合適的連接詞把這些要點連接成文，如to begin with首先；besides而且；what’s more等。也要注意運用適當?shù)母呒壘湫腿缍ㄕZ從句，強調(diào)句等讓文章不顯得那么平淡，而有文采。在詞匯的運用上也要注意，使用相對高級的詞匯提升文章的檔次。
點評：在完成提綱類作文的時候，務必要注意不要遺漏要點。同時注意對要點的連接，使之成為一個整體。