Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。

Getting up early has been seen as a good habit since ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and got up early, we would be energetic (精力充沛的) the whole day. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all.

In fact, morning is the best time of a day. In the morning, the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best condition. Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and correctly in the morning than any other time of the day. And it is certain that we find it easier to understand what we learn. If we get up early and do some morning exercises or only take a short walk in the morning, without doubt we can build up our bodies and become much healthier. Also we will have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. For example, if everyone in the family gets up early, the wife will have enough time to prepare the breakfast for the whole family. Children will have enough time to catch the school bus, and the husband will never forget to change his dirty shirt. Everything is in order. However, if we get up late, we’ll probably have to do everything in a hurry.

Getting up early is such a good habit that we should try our best to keep it. If we stick to (堅持) getting up early every day, we will certainly benefit a lot from it.

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Answer 1

【答案】Since ancient times ,great importance has been attached to getting up early .Firstly ,morning is a fantastic time to enjoy the freshest air and have a more accurate memory .Secondly ,people who stick to physical exercise in the morning will be in better health .Finally ,getting up early can enable us to make good preparations for the day . (58 words)

【解析】

本篇書面表達是概要寫作。讀完所給文章后用不多于60個詞總結(jié)文章要點，要用自己的語言，不能用文章的原句。文章給出了早起的三個好處，建議我們都應(yīng)該早起。

寫作步驟：

1）細(xì)讀原文。首先要仔細(xì)閱讀短文，掌握文章主旨和結(jié)構(gòu)，明確各段的大意。

2）弄清要求。這篇概要寫作是寫全文概要，不是寫某一部分的概要，或者就某些問題寫出要點。

3）列出原文要點。分析原文的內(nèi)容和結(jié)構(gòu)，將內(nèi)容分項扼要表述并注意在結(jié)構(gòu)上的順序。在此基礎(chǔ)上選出與文章主題密切相關(guān)的部分。

4）在寫作時要特別注意下面幾點：

（1）概要應(yīng)包括原文中的主要事實，略去不必要的細(xì)節(jié)。

（2）安排好篇幅的比例，概要應(yīng)同原文保持協(xié)調(diào)，即用較多的文字寫重要內(nèi)容，用較少的文字寫次要內(nèi)容。

（3）注意要點之間的銜接，要用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞語貫通全文，切忌只簡單地寫出一些互不相干的句子，但也不要每兩句之間都加關(guān)聯(lián)詞語，以免顯得生硬。

（4）不排斥用原文的某些詞句，但不要照搬原文的句子，如果不能完全用自己的話語表達，至少對原文句子做一些同義詞替換，如果結(jié)構(gòu)上也能有一些轉(zhuǎn)換會更好。

（5）計算詞數(shù)，看是否符合規(guī)定的詞數(shù)要求。

本篇概要寫作的原文是說明文，文章的主題是早起，文章的結(jié)構(gòu)是：給出了早起的三個理由；建議應(yīng)該早起。在寫作時先要寫出文章的主題，接著介紹早起的三個理由，最后給出建議。詳寫理由，頭尾略。注意各點之間的連貫，使成通順的一篇文章。