Question

13．你的英國朋友Jim所在的學(xué)校要組織學(xué)生來中國旅行，有兩條線路可以選擇："長江之行"或者"泰山之旅"．Jim來信希望你能給些建議．請你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：
1．你建議的線路；
2．你的理由；
3．你的祝愿．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)不少于50；
2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Jim，
I am glad to learn that you are coming to visit China．
Of the two routes given by your school，I strongly recommend that the trip to the Yangtze River deserve the effort．For one thing，you can experience rich Chinese culture along the river，which has been handed down from generation to generation； For another，the river，extending as long as 6300 kilometres，runs through different parts of China．As a result，it can provides splendid landscape of different kinds．
I believe that the trip，both relaxing and rewarding，is bound to be a memorable experience for you．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
Of the two routes given by your school，I strongly recommend that（1）the trip to the Changjiang River deserve the effort（2）．你們學(xué)校所提供的兩個路線中，我強(qiáng)烈建議長江之行值得付出努力．
（1）recommend vt．推薦，建議，后接賓語從句，從句中動詞用"（should）+動詞原形"，為虛擬語氣的用法，是書面表達(dá)的亮點句型．
（2）deserve vt．值得；deserve the effort值得付出努力．
句型二：
For one thing（1），you can experience rich Chinese culture along the river，which （2）has been handed down from generation to generation（3）； 一則，你能夠體驗長江沿途的中國文化，它是代代相傳下來的文化．
（1）For one thing…for another一則…再則…；關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使得文章流暢；
（2）which 引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句；which指代上文的Chinese culture；非限制性定語從句是書面表達(dá)中的常見的高級句型．
（3）hand down…from generation to generation代代相傳；短語是書面表達(dá)中的常見高級詞匯．
句型三：
I believe that the trip，both relaxing and rewarding（1），is bound to （2）be a memorable experience for you．我相信，這個旅行，既放松又值得；肯定會成為你的一次難忘的經(jīng)歷．
（1）both relaxing and rewarding既放松又值得，現(xiàn)在分詞短語做trip的非限制性定語；分詞做定語或狀語一直是書面表達(dá)中被推崇的高分句型．
（2）be bound to do 必然會…

解答 Dear Jim，
       I am glad to learn that you are coming to visit China（表示歡迎）．
       Of the two routes given by your school，I strongly recommend that the trip to the Changjiang River deserve the effort【高分句型一】（建議的線路）．For one thing，you can experience rich Chinese culture along the river，which has been handed down from generation to generation【高分句型二】； For another，the river，extending as long as 6300 kilometres，runs through different parts of China．As a result，it can provides splendid landscape of different kinds（選擇該線的理由）．
       I believe that the trip，both relaxing and rewarding，is bound to be a memorable experience for you【高分句型三】（祝愿）．
Yours，
 Li Hua

點評 寫作時首先審題，本題體裁為建議信，屬于常規(guī)復(fù)習(xí)內(nèi)容．選擇其中一條線路，圍繞中國傳統(tǒng)文化的主線去寫就基本能扣題，稍微需要注意題干要點之間的界限，確保要點齊全．其次要考慮高分詞語和句型的選用，從句、非謂語動詞、倒裝、強(qiáng)調(diào)句型等都是可考慮的高級句型；詞語和句型的選用要包含作者的感情色彩和增強(qiáng)表達(dá)的氣勢；再次，運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞如besides、what's  more、moreover、for one thing …for another等，使文字更加流暢．