Question

【題目】假如你是李華。你的朋友Tommy是一個手機低頭族，無論站著、坐著、走著，他都在低頭玩手機。請就此給Tommy寫一封信。

內(nèi)容包括：1．做手機低頭族的危害（過度使用手機會導致眼睛疾病或帶來其他健康問題，給自身安全帶來隱患）；

2．希望他改掉這個壞習慣。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．開頭語和結(jié)尾語已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：過度使用overuse

Dear Tommy,

There seems to be a trend that people now tend to play with their cell phones no matter where they are. And I know you are not an exception.

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Yours,

Li Hua

【思路導航】本篇作文是一封書信。此類作文是近幾年來高考常考的內(nèi)容。對于此類作文的寫作，考生應注意以下幾點：一、寫作時要將題目中所要求的內(nèi)容全都包括進去，不要有任何遺漏。二、在寫作的過程中，要注意連接詞和某些高級詞匯的運用。三、要注意適當增加細節(jié)。四、字跡要工整，注意行文連貫。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tommy,

There seems to be a trend that people now tend to play with their cell phones no matter where they are. And I know you are not an exception.

There is no doubt that cell phones play an important part in our daily life. However, being addicted to cell phones does a lot of harm to the owners. First, staring at a cell phone screen for hours on end can lead to dry eyes or other eye diseases. Second, if you always overuse your cell phone, your hands as well as your neck will ache, which will have a bad effect on you. Besides, on your way home or to school, with your attention fully focused on the cell phone, perhaps you will fail to notice the traffic around you, which will be a great danger to you.

Therefore, I sincerely expect you to give up your bad habit and use your cell phone wisely.

Yours,

Li Hua

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