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共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（/\），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

There are lots of experience in our life. The most unforgettable one for me is the speech competition holding last year. I’m interested in English. When my English teacher told me that I had chosen to take part in the speech competition, I devoted me to the preparation. I was determined to win the first prize. I was such nervous when I stood on the stage that I forgot everything. Not until I caught a sight of my teacher did I calm down. Finally，I do a good job. When I heard I got the first prize，my heart was filled in joy and tears rolled down. Through this speech competition，I understand that it is confident that makes people successfully.

1.experience改為experiences

2.holding改為hold

3.加上been

4.me改為myself

5.such改為so

6.去掉a

7.do改為did

8.in改為with

9.confident改為confidence

10.successfully改為successful/succeed

【解析】

試題分析：考查后置定語，固定短語，時(shí)態(tài)等。

1. are lots of experience in our life，lots of要修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，故experience改為experiences

2. most unforgettable one for me is the speech competition holding last year.要做competition的后置定語，應(yīng)是被舉行，故用ed形式表被動(dòng)，故holding改為hold

3. my English teacher told me that I had chosen to take part in the speech competition,我應(yīng)是被選擇參加演講比賽，故在had后加上been

4. devoted me to the preparation.，devote oneself to…固定短語，致力于…故me改為myself

5. was such nervous when I stood on the stage that I forgot everything.so…that…固定句型，如此…以致…我如此緊張以致于站在臺上時(shí)忘了一切，故such改為so

6. until I caught a sight of my teacher，catch sight of…固定短語，看見….故去掉a

7. do a good job，本文是講述過去的事，應(yīng)用過去時(shí)，故do改為did

8. heart was filled in joy，be filled with固定短語，充滿了….,故in改為with

9. is confident that makes people successfully，it is ..that是強(qiáng)調(diào)句，本句是表達(dá)自信使人成功，應(yīng)用自信的名詞形式，故confident改為confidence

10. is confident that makes people successfully，make為使役動(dòng)詞，后接動(dòng)詞原形或形容詞表示使人…，故successfully改為successful/succeed

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