Question

11．最近，很多城市采取措施嚴懲亂穿馬路的行人（Jaywalker）．為此，學校就"中國式過馬路（Chinese style road crossing ）的原因"對100名學生進行了采訪．請你根據(jù)表格中的采訪結果為學校網(wǎng)站寫一篇短文：

1．簡要分析圖表
2．發(fā)表個人觀點
3．提出建議
注意：1．詞數(shù)：120-150；
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，
使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
For example，whoever breaks the traffic rules should be punished
高分句型二：
Only in this way can we cross streets safely．
句型一 whoever breaks the traffic rules should be punished 該句是一個由whoever引導的主語從句，whoever 在從句中作主語
句型二 Only in this way can we cross streets safely 該句是一個倒裝句，only位于句首修飾介詞短語時，句子要使用部分倒裝，即將主語同謂語部分助動詞進行位置的交換．

解答 Chinese style road crossing has been a hot topic on the internet recently．（點題，引出下文）
Now many people cross streets without looking at the traffic lights．（現(xiàn)象）Why？I think there are two main reasons．So the following are the result of 100 students investaged．Fifty-nine percent of  stuents think many poeple  lack awareness of traffic safety．（缺乏交通安全意識）21% percent of people go with others．Besides，14% of people are so busy that they can't wait the traffic lights，and  6%of people don't want to wait for the green light．（匆忙趕時間）
  However，it has brought danger to themselves as well as to others．So I hope something must be done to avoid traffic accidents． For example，whoever breaks the traffic rules should be punished．（高分句型一） As middle school students，we should obey the traffic rules．（遵守交通規(guī)則）What's more，Iwill try my best to advise people to obey the rules．Only in this way can we cross streets safely．（自己的建議）．（高分句型二）

點評 本文是一個圖標類書面表達，寫作時應注意觀察圖表所提供的信息，盡量要將其所列內(nèi)容清楚表達；另外考生平時應注意積累相應的詞匯，用準確的、簡介的語言將作文表達清楚．