Question

10．假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Velinda下個(gè)月將在你校參加一個(gè)交換生項(xiàng)目．在此期間她希望你能教她漢語(yǔ)．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，用英語(yǔ)給她寫封信．
時(shí)間：每天下午5：00-7：00
地點(diǎn)：你家書房
內(nèi)容：1．日常會(huì)話
2．中文歌曲
3．中國(guó)節(jié)日
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好．
Dear Velinda，
Glad to hear from you．I get to know that you are coming to my school as an exchange student．（高分句型一）You asked me whether I would like to teach you Chinese in my spare time．My answer is definitely yes．My plan is as follows：
We can have our Chinese class in my study from 5 pm．to 7 pm．a(chǎn)fter school．In the class，we will practice spoken Chinese and listen to some beautiful Chinese songs．What's more，I'd like to introduce some Chinese festivals to you，such as the Spring Festival，the Lantern Festival．（高分句型二）
I believe you can improve your Chinese and we'll have a good time together．（高分句型三）
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息美國(guó)朋友Velinda下個(gè)月將在你校參加一個(gè)交換生項(xiàng)目．在此期間她希望你能教她漢語(yǔ)．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，用英語(yǔ)給她寫封信，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：時(shí)間：每天下午5：00-7：00；地點(diǎn)：你家書房
內(nèi)容：日常會(huì)話；中文歌曲；中國(guó)節(jié)日  2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：hear from收到…的來(lái)信；in my spare time在空閑時(shí)間；have a good time過(guò)得愉快
I get to know that you are coming to my school as an exchange student．（高分句型一）
What's more，I'd like to introduce some Chinese festivals to you，such as the Spring Festival，the Lantern Festival．（高分句型二）
I believe you can improve your Chinese and we'll have a good time together．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Velinda，
      Glad to hear from you．I get to know that you are coming to my school as an exchange student．（高分句型一）You asked me whether I would like to teach you Chinese in my spare time．My answer is definitely yes．My plan is as follows：
     We can have our Chinese class in my study from 5pm．to 7 pm．a(chǎn)fter school．In the class，we will practice spoken Chinese and listen to some beautiful Chinese songs．What's more，I'd like to introduce some Chinese festivals to you，such as the Spring Festival，the Lantern Festival．（高分句型二）
     I believe you can improve your Chinese and we'll have a good time together．（高分句型三）
     Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．