Question

12．假如你是李麗，正在家鄉(xiāng)的一所普通高中就讀．最近你的叔叔給你來信，建議你到他所在城市的一所重點學校讀書，并列舉了那里的優(yōu)勢：環(huán)境優(yōu)美，名師眾多，教學設施先進，升學率高．請你寫一封100詞左右的回信表示感謝并說明拒絕去那里讀書的理由．
注意：1．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
2．文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出．
Dear Uncle，
I'm very glad to receive your letter and thank youvery much for your loving care．      ．
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely，
LiLi．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)展開敘述．內(nèi)容主要包括：一表示感謝；二表示拒絕；三說明拒絕的理由．
高分句型：
1．But considering my personal things，I prefer to study at my present school．句子里considering做狀語，和主語I之間是主動關(guān)系．prefer to 表示"更喜歡"．
但是考慮我的個人因素，我更喜歡在現(xiàn)在的學校學習．
2．what's more，in recent years our school has also been equipped with some modern teaching facilities，which make our classes more interesting and lively句子里which 代指主句，表示"這件事"．
再者，近年來我們學校也裝備了現(xiàn)代化的教學設施，這讓我們的學習更有趣更活潑．

解答 Dear uncle，
I'm very glad to receive your letter and thank you very much for your loving care．（表示感謝）Maybe it would be beneficial to me if I studied at a key school in your city．But considering my personal things，I prefer to study at my present school．【高分句型一】Although our school is located in the country side，its environment is very beautiful．Now，I'm getting or well with all my teacher s，who teach well and are very responsible．（表示拒絕）
I think whether a student studies well depends on the student himself or herself，not on the teachers．what's more，in recent years our school has also been equipped with some modern teaching facilities，which make our classes more interesting and lively．【高分句型二】Of course，if I went to your city to study，I might have more chances to go to university．However，I might also experience more stress，which would be harmful to my study．（說明拒絕的理由）
Best wishes
Yours  sincerely，
LiLi

點評 開車提綱類作文．
書面表達不僅反映在表達內(nèi)容上，也反映在書面形式上．一定要注意單詞拼寫正確，書寫規(guī)范，字跡工整，卷面力求整潔，正確使用標點符號，使別人看起來耳目一新，具有整體美感，從而提高自己的得分檔