Question

文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。
　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
　　注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
　　   2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。
Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9: 00 am, I go to the bookstore with my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn’t know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. At 10: 00, we went to cinema. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. It took to us about two hours to see it. Having seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some friends even burst out tears. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing again. What a happy day!  I hope tomorrow I will be even happier!

Answer 1

小題1:does→is
小題2:go→went
小題3:was→were
小題4:what→which
小題5:在cinema前加the
小題6:but →and
小題7:去掉to
小題8:moving→moved
小題9:tear→tears或out改成into
小題10:very→well

試題分析：文章講述作者在星期日和朋友去書店買書，到電影院看電影的事情，這是個很好的周末。
小題1:上文用的是“is”，所以下文仍用“is”="my" life is also full of sunshine
小題2:我跟朋友去書店是過去發(fā)生的事情，要用一般過去時
小題3:有很多新書。主語是“books”為復(fù)數(shù)。所以要將was改成were
小題4:what用于無范圍的指代，而which用于有一定范圍內(nèi)的指代。
小題5:去看電影“go to the cinema”為習(xí)慣表達(dá)
小題6:電影是《唐山大地震》，很多人在排隊等侯。上下文沒有轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，而是承遞關(guān)系
小題7:我們花了兩個小時看電影。句型：It took sb sometime to do sth。某人花費(fèi)多長時間做某事。
小題8:現(xiàn)在分詞作表語說明主語所具有的性質(zhì)或特征，而過去分詞表語說明主語所具有的心理感受，這兒是指人的心理感受“被感動了”be moved
小題9: “burst into tears突然大哭起來” 或burst out crying是固定搭配，
小題10:修飾worth的副詞習(xí)慣要用well，而不能用very