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5．自行車是公認(rèn)的綠色交通工具，也是我國最為普遍使用的交通工具．但隨著汽車擁有量的不斷增加，自行車出行受到很大沖擊．請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語寫一篇講演稿，呼吁大家騎自行車出行，享受低碳生活．
    內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：
    1．對環(huán)境的影響；2．對能源的消耗；3．對健康的影響．
    注意：
    1．詞數(shù)120左右；2．開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
    3．低碳生活low carbon life
Good morning，ladies and gentlemen，
    With the improvement of the living standard，there has been a tendency that people begin to turn to motor vehicles．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
With the improvement of the living standard，there has been a tendency that people begin to turn to motor vehicles．隨著人們生活水平的提高，人們使用小汽車的趨勢變成了一種流行．
高分句型二：
Thirdly，riding bikes does good to our health．第三，騎自行車對我們的身體有好處．
句型一 that people begin to turn to motor vehicles．該句是一個由that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句，that在從句中不作句子成分，同位的名詞是tendency．同位語從句即用一個句子對某個抽象名詞進(jìn)行解釋說明
句型二 riding bikes does good to our health 該句的主語是一個現(xiàn)在分詞短語充當(dāng)，此時應(yīng)注意謂語應(yīng)使用單數(shù)．其次該句謂語使用了一個固定的短語：do good to 對…有好處
此外，文章還使用了以下高級詞匯和短語：with the improvement of  隨著…的提高  keep fit 保持健康，in a word 總之

解答 Good morning，ladies and gentlemen，
   With the improvement of the living standard，there has been a tendency that people begin to turn to motor vehicles．（高分句型一）（提出觀點(diǎn)）However，in my opinion，we should encourage people to keep on riding bicycle．
   Firstly，bicycle cause little pollution to the enviroment．Since a bicycle is much quieter than a motor vehicle，it doesn't cause noise pollution．Moreover，a bicycle never gives off harmful gas into the air．Secondly，either in the process of making bicycle or using them，it costs much less energy than a motor vehicle does．Thirdly，riding bikes does good to our health．（高分句型二）It is useful for training，building our body and keeping us fit．（分析不利影響）
   In a word，riding bikes will benefit both indivdual and the society．So why not enjoy a low carbon life by riding bikes more often？
   Thank you!

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