Question

【題目】中學(xué)生體質(zhì)狀況堪憂，許多學(xué)生缺乏運(yùn)動(dòng)。為了讓同學(xué)們重視運(yùn)動(dòng)，你校決定出版一期以“運(yùn)動(dòng)與健康”為主題的校刊，請(qǐng)以Benefits of taking regular exercise為題，為�？�撰寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。

內(nèi)容包括：

1.控制體重；2.精力充沛；3.預(yù)防疾病；4.增強(qiáng)自信。

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Answer 1

【答案】

Benefits of taking regular exercise

For various reasons, many students fail to take regular exercise. In fact, taking regular exercise benefits us a lot.

To begin with, exercise can help us control weight. When we engage in physical activity, we burn lots of calories. Secondly, regular physical activity can improve our muscle strength and endurance, which can keep us energetic. Thirdly, taking part in physical activity regularly can keep us away from a wide range of health problems to some extent. Finally, taking regular exercise makes us confident because we feel much better about ourselves after working out.

Therefore, to feel better, have more energy and keep fit, we should take exercise on a regular basis.

【解析】

試題分析：本次書(shū)面表達(dá)的主題是學(xué)生們應(yīng)給予足夠重視的：“運(yùn)動(dòng)與健康”。寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，明確該作文的要點(diǎn)為：1.控制體重；2.精力充沛；3.預(yù)防疾�。�4.增強(qiáng)自信。2、表達(dá)時(shí)要重點(diǎn)突出、條理清晰。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本篇范文采用三段式重點(diǎn)突出，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。例如taking regular exercise benefits us a lot.是動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)。, which can keep us energetic.是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。還有make的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)：makes us confident. 此外，文章還使用了大量短語(yǔ)engage in, keep us away from,to some extent, working out等。而To begin with, Secondly, Thirdly, Finally, 以及Therefore, 的使用使文章內(nèi)容層次感強(qiáng)，也使語(yǔ)言更加連貫。