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假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線〔\〕劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Nowadays many young students are like cigarettes. One reason is because they feel it’s a kind of fashion. By smoke, they can look cool. Some teenagers think smoking is good to social contact, so that they can develop social skill. Some others want reduce stress and become relaxing, so they join smokers. And in fact, smoking is a danger. It really do harm to health. Besides, many fire disasters is in one way or another related to smoking.


【小題1】去掉are
【小題2】because 改成that
【小題3】smoke改成 smoking
【小題4】 to 改成for
【小題5】skill改成skills
【小題6】want后面加to
【小題7】 relaxing 改成relaxed, so they join smokers.
【小題8】And 改成But
【小題9】do改成does
【小題10】is改成are

解析試題分析：文章介紹現(xiàn)在很多年輕人喜歡香煙，分析了他們喜歡抽煙的原因，也說明抽煙的害處。
【小題1】現(xiàn)在很多年輕人喜歡香煙。Like是動詞“喜歡“，不要be動詞，去掉are
【小題2】原因之一是他們認為這是一種時尚。主語是reason的時候，表語從句用that，because 改成that
【小題3】通過抽煙，他們可以看起來很酷。介詞by后面接動名詞：smoke改成 smoking
【小題4】一些年輕人覺得抽煙對社會交際是有好處的。Be good for對…有好處。 to 改成for
【小題5】這樣他們可以發(fā)展社交技能。Skill是可數名詞，這里應該用復數，改成skills
【小題6】一些其他人想減壓，放松。want后面加不定式to do
【小題7】 relaxing是修飾五，修飾人用relaxed
【小題8】但是實際上，抽煙是危險的。這句話和前面的句子是轉折的關系；And 改成But
【小題9】這對健康真的有害。主語是it，謂語是第三人稱單數：do改成does
【小題10】很多火災某種程度上和抽煙有關。主語是many fire disasters ，所以謂語是復數：is改成are
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