Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

I’m from Detroit in the United States，and during his senior year in high school I win a scholarship to study the singing during the summer in London．When I went there，I stayed in someone’s home．The people were very sweetly，and it was a really fun summer．I got the inside view of that it’s like to live there．I loved it，but I have to say，one thing that surprising me was that you had to go to such many different stores to do your shopping．There are also a lot of differences in the language．They said thing like“ring you up”instead of“give you a call．”It took me a little while figure out these differences，because it was fun．

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】his---my

【2】win—won

【3】the singing---singing

【4】sweetly---sweet

【5】that---what

【6】surprising---surprised

【7】such—so

【8】thing---things

【9】figure---to figure

【10】because—but

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬故事類文章，講述一個(gè)美國(guó)人去英國(guó)感受到了兩國(guó)文化的不同。

【1】his---my 考察代詞。根據(jù)語(yǔ)境可知，本文講述作者的經(jīng)歷，故用my。

【2】win—won 考察動(dòng)詞。講述作者自己的經(jīng)歷，故用過(guò)去時(shí)won。

【3】the singing---singing 此處為唱歌，為抽象名詞，故用零冠詞，故不用the。

【4】sweetly---sweet 考察形容詞。此處做be動(dòng)詞的表語(yǔ)，故用形容詞sweet。

【5】that---what 考察連接代詞。此處為of的賓語(yǔ)從句，連接詞在從句中做like的賓語(yǔ)，故用連接代詞what。

【6】surprising---surprised 考察動(dòng)詞。此處為定語(yǔ)從句修飾先行詞one thing，該詞在從句中做謂語(yǔ)，故用過(guò)去時(shí)surprised。

【7】such—so 考察副詞。由于有many修飾名詞短語(yǔ)，故用so。

【8】thing---things 考察名詞。Thing為可數(shù)名詞，故用其復(fù)數(shù)形式things。

【9】figure---to figure 考察非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。此處為句型it take sb to do sth，故用不定式to figure。

【10】because—but 考察連詞。根據(jù)句意可知，前后兩句的邏輯關(guān)系為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故用but。