Question

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

Honesty means speaking the truth and being fair. Honesty is a good virtue. If you are honest

all the time, you'll be trusted and respected by others. A liar is always looked down upon and

regarded as a black sheep by the people around. Once you lie, people will never believe you

even if you speak the truth.

However, nowadays it seems that more and more people believe in money at the sacrifice of

honesty. To them, among such things as health, beauty, money, intelligence, honesty, reputation

and talent, honesty is the only thing that can be thrown away. They don't understand or pretend

not to understand that honesty is the biggest fortune for humans,.and that it is necessary to do

everything well.

In short, honesty is gold. Honest, your reputation will become great; dishonest, your name

will be spoiled: Therefore, we should never make such an excuse as "A little dishonesty is only a

slight thing." We should remove immediately the seed of dishonesty once it's sowed in our

minds.

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1．以約30個(gè)詞概括上面短文；

2.以約120個(gè)詞談?wù)勀銓?duì)誠(chéng)信的想法，內(nèi)容包括：

（1)失去誠(chéng)信的危害性。

（2）舉例說明誠(chéng)信的重要性并談?wù)勀銈�(gè)人的看法。

【寫作要求】

1.在作文中可以使用自己親身的經(jīng)歷、虛構(gòu)的故事或生活中的事例，也可以參照閱

讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語篇連貫

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

It is known that honesty plays an important role in our life, which can contribute to our success and earn us respect from others. Therefore, honesty is of vital importance and bring people benefits.

Dishonesty may bring people short-term benefits. But actually, it will cost them friendship, love, social status or even life. Dishonesty destroys the harmonious relationship between people. What’s worse, it even becomes a barrier of the moral development in society.

San Lu Milk Powder Company made a lot of money by dishonest means. But when the scandal was disclosed ,not only did the company have to close down, but also some officials concerned were sent to prison.

Personally , we should keep in mind that honesty is the best policy. We should try our best to avoid dishonesty. Only in this way can we trust each other and have a harmonious society .

【解析】

本文屬于讀寫任務(wù)，考生首先要?dú)w納短文大意，提煉出討論的中心思想，然后再根據(jù)這一中心思想在做詳細(xì)縮寫。本文對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中出現(xiàn)一些比較高級(jí)的短語plays an important role in扮演重要的角色；contribute to 有助于；What’s worse,更糟糕的是；keep sth in mind 記��；try one’s best to do 竭盡全力做某事；It is known that honesty plays an important role in our life, which can contribute to our success and earn us respect from others.這個(gè)句子中體現(xiàn)眾所周知這個(gè)重要的句型結(jié)構(gòu)，還有which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句。But when the scandal was disclosed ,not only did the company have to close down, but also some officials concerned were sent to prison這個(gè)句子中not only but also引導(dǎo)兩個(gè)句子，第一個(gè)句子用倒裝的結(jié)構(gòu)。

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