Question

【題目】請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合你生活中的一個(gè)事例，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。

We all know that "Chances favor the prepared mind". Only if you are well prepared, will you be able to seize them.

注意：1．無(wú)須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ)。

2．除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限。

3．文中不得透漏個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

4．詞數(shù)為120左右。

Answer 1

【答案】

There is no denying that we are eager for golden chances to be successful in life. However, many people are not aware that chances are always for those who get well prepared. I didn’t realize it until I went to high school.

Soon after I became senior one student, a singing competition was to be held in school. I love singing but I was very shy then and had never sung at the top of my voice in public. I could only sing to myself most of the time. Somehow, I wanted to have a try. When I talked about it with my parents, they inspired me to follow my inner voice and told me as long as I got well prepared, I would make it. With their encouragement, I became confident and practiced hard after class. Sometimes, I would turn to my music teacher for help. When I felt I was ready, the day came. Standing on the stage, I took a deep breath and began to sing with my full emotions. It turned out that I won the first prize .

This experience has taught me a precious lesson in my life. If you are not successful yet, most probably you haven’t been well prepared. Once you have, chances will surely favor you.

【解析】

試題分析：本題是要寫一篇命題作文。注意條理要清晰，邏輯順序和結(jié)構(gòu)要恰當(dāng)，同時(shí)要盡量保持簡(jiǎn)潔精干的內(nèi)容，不拖泥帶水。要注意題中所給的信息，不可偏題，應(yīng)用文寫作對(duì)于文章內(nèi)容的要求是要達(dá)到寫作目的。盡量保持卷面整潔，字體美觀，注意行文的連貫性。

【亮點(diǎn)分析】

第一句用了一個(gè)表語(yǔ)從句There is no denying that we are eager for golden chances to be successful in life. 不

可置否的是，我們都渴望人生成功的黃金機(jī)會(huì)。第二句也是一個(gè)that引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句However, many people are not aware that chances are always for those who get well prepared. 然而，很多人都不清楚機(jī)會(huì)總是偏愛(ài)有準(zhǔn)備的人。第三句是一個(gè)until引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。I didn’t realize it until I went to high school.直到我上了高中我才明白了這個(gè)道理。第二段第五句是一個(gè)when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句 When I talked about it with my parents, they inspired me to follow my inner voice and told me as long as I got well prepared, I would make it. 當(dāng)我告訴了我的父母，他們鼓勵(lì)我聽(tīng)從我內(nèi)心的聲音，告訴我只要我準(zhǔn)備好了，我就能成功。With their encouragement, I became confident and practiced hard after class. Sometimes, I would turn to my music teacher for help.第八句 When I felt I was ready, the day came.是一個(gè)when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，當(dāng)我感覺(jué)自己準(zhǔn)備好了的時(shí)候，那天來(lái)臨了。 第九句用了一個(gè)分詞做狀語(yǔ)。Standing on the stage, I took a deep breath and began to sing with my full emotions. 第二段最后一句是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句It turned out that I won the first prize .結(jié)果我得了一等獎(jiǎng)。 第三段第二句是ｉｆ引導(dǎo)的條件句 If you are not successful yet, most probably you haven’t been well prepared. 如果你沒(méi)有成功，可能是因?yàn)槟銢](méi)有好好準(zhǔn)備。除了從句以外，文章還用了一些很好的短語(yǔ)：as long as 只要…turn to …for help向…求助；taught me a precious lesson 給我上了珍貴的一課。