Question

20．假設你是某中學學生李華，請根據右邊四幅圖，用英文寫篇短文，記敘你參加學校演講比賽的過程，并簡要發(fā)表你的感想．

注意：
1．考生可適當發(fā)揮，使文章內容充實、連貫；
2．詞數120左右；
3．文中不能出現考生的具體信息．
參考詞匯：演講廳lecture hall
演講稿speech draft．
On Monday，I saw a poster which read that a speech contest with thetopic"honesty"would be held at the lecture hall the next Saturday morning．【高分句型】（Picture 1 看到有關演講比賽的通知）
With my parents'encouragement，I entered for the contest．At first I felt at a loss about my speech draft．After referring to some magazines，I got down to my draft．（Picture 2 著手演講比賽的草稿）Having tailored it for several times，I practiced my speechat home every day．【高分句型】My parents were more than pleased to see me so devoted．（Picture 3 調整修改草稿并在家練習）Then came the big day for my speech．【高分句型】A little bit nervous as Iwas，I managed to deliver my speech fluently．【高分句型】（Picture 4 成功自信地登臺演講）
I've learned a lot from thecontest．Confidence comes hand in hand with adequate preparations．Wellprepared，I can do everything successfully．【高分句型】（感謝）．

Answer 1

分析 本文是圖畫類作文，要求根據四幅圖的先后順序描述參加學校演講比賽的過程并發(fā)表感想．在寫作時，人稱以第一和第三人稱為主．時態(tài)以一般過去時為主．根據情景的發(fā)展，抓住細節(jié)按順序安排好材料．重要短語：hold a speech contest （舉行演講比賽），enter for （報名參加），feel/be at a loss （茫然不知所措），refer to（參閱，查閱），get down to （著手開始做某事），tailor sth（調整，修改某物），more than pleased todo sth（做某事非常高興），manage to do sth（設法成功地做某事），deliver one's speech（發(fā)表演講）； learn sth from…（從…中學會…）；hand in hand（密切關聯地；同時并進地）．
【高分句型】
1．I saw a poster which read that a speech contest with the topic"honesty"would be held at the lecture hall the next Saturday morning．
這里是which引導的定語從句，which在定語從句中作主語，先行詞是a poster，定語從句中的謂語動詞為read，read之后是賓語從句．賓語從句中a speech contest with the topic"honesty"，謂語動詞為would be held，at the lecture hall the next Saturday morning為地點狀語．
2．Having tailored it for several times，I practiced my speech at home every day．
這里是現在分詞的完成式+賓語作狀語，主句為I practiced my speech at home every day，主句的主語I與所給動詞tailor存在邏輯上的主動關系，且動作存在先后關系，調整草稿動作在練習動作之前．
3．Then came the big day for my speech．
這里是全部倒裝，其結構為"時間副詞+謂語動詞+主語"．
4．A little bit nervous as I was，I managed to deliver my speech fluently．
這里是部分倒裝，其結構為"形容詞+as/though+主語"．

解答 On Monday，I saw a poster which read that a speech contest with thetopic"honesty"would be held at the lecture hall the next Saturday morning．【高分句型】（Picture 1 看到有關演講比賽的通知）
With my parents'encouragement，I entered for the contest．At first I felt at a loss about my speech draft．After referring to some magazines，I got down to my draft．（Picture 2 著手演講比賽的草稿）Having tailored it for several times，I practiced my speechat home every day．【高分句型】My parents were more than pleased to see me so devoted．（Picture 3 調整修改草稿并在家練習）Then came the big day for my speech．【高分句型】A little bit nervous as Iwas，I managed to deliver my speech fluently．【高分句型】（Picture 4 成功自信地登臺演講）
I've learned a lot from thecontest．Confidence comes hand in hand with adequate preparations．Wellprepared，I can do everything successfully．【高分句型】（感謝）

點評 寫作看圖作文時，首先認真看圖，結合圖片和文字，確定所要表達的主題是什么，然后圍繞主題，提煉要點，合理想象，對譯出的要點通過合理的組合，加上必要的連接詞使表達連貫．同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．