Question

6．目前，學(xué)校存在少數(shù)學(xué)生考試作弊現(xiàn)象．請(qǐng)你以"My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations"為題，發(fā)表個(gè)人看法．
注意：
1．短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
2．短文標(biāo)題與開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
3．詞數(shù)：100左右．
4．參考詞匯：cheat作弊；please取悅于…；break the rules破壞規(guī)矩
My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations
It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school．
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Answer 1

分析 這是一篇命題作文，就作弊現(xiàn)象發(fā)表看法．寫(xiě)作時(shí)，首先要寫(xiě)全要點(diǎn)，包括：列出現(xiàn)象，說(shuō)明原因，分析弊端，表達(dá)看法；其次要以第一人稱來(lái)寫(xiě)作；最后要注意時(shí)態(tài)，文章講述的是客觀現(xiàn)實(shí)，要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．
重點(diǎn)句型和短語(yǔ)：
take examinations 參加考試
please their parents and teachers 取悅老師和父母
get well prepared for 為…作充分準(zhǔn)備
As students，we often take examinations at school，but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us．
句中which引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句修飾examinations．
So when taking examinations，they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers．
句中when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，從句中省略了相同的主語(yǔ)和系動(dòng)詞，是一個(gè)省略句．
In my opinion，it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools．
句中it作形式主語(yǔ)，真正的主語(yǔ)是后面的動(dòng)詞不定式；because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句．

解答 My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations
     It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school．（列舉現(xiàn)象）
     As students，we often take examinations at school，but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us．（高分句型一）On the other hand，some of us are lazy and don't work hard at their lessons．So when taking examinations，they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers．（高分句型二）（分析原因）
     In my opinion，it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools．（高分句型三）We students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations．What's more，we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations．（表達(dá)看法）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 書(shū)面表達(dá)題考查的是英語(yǔ)的應(yīng)用能力．寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意：要點(diǎn)的提煉要全；關(guān)鍵短語(yǔ)和句型要寫(xiě)對(duì)；過(guò)渡詞和過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)使用要正確．