Question

16．假如你是張華，近日寫(xiě)信給某英文報(bào)的編輯，反映目前人們養(yǎng)寵物帶來(lái)的問(wèn)題，希望得到媒體的關(guān)注和支持．信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下要點(diǎn)：
1．寵物過(guò)多，噪音擾民；2．污染環(huán)境；3．不少人尤其孩子曾被驚嚇或咬傷；4．傳播疾病．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．信的開(kāi)頭和署名已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear editor，
Nowadays some people in our city are keeping too many pets，but they don't care about it enough．So I want to tell you something about the problems caused by it．
                      
Yours faithfully，
Zhang Hua．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）First of all，as is known to us，pets make too much noise that trouble residents a lot．
該句型使用了as 引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，as充當(dāng)主語(yǔ)；
What's more，（高分句型二）it's widely accepted that animal wastes pollute the environment，which makes people quite uncomfortale．
句子使用了It is widely accepted that意思是人們普遍接受，為主語(yǔ)從句；還使用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，修飾先行詞這樣一件事情；
（高分句型三）The most important is that pets can spread some disease and this has attracted much attention．
該句型使用了that引導(dǎo)的標(biāo)語(yǔ)從句；
（高分句型四）Taking all these factors into consideration，I sencerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media to do something for it．
在句子里taking…into consideration是現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)，是非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)形式；
高級(jí)詞匯：for the following reasons接下來(lái)的原因；uncomfortale不舒服的； frighten 使某人害怕；
What's more而且表示遞進(jìn)；First of all首先；

解答 Dear editor，
Nowadays some people in our city are keeping too many pets，but they don't care about it enough．So I want to tell you something about the problems caused by it．
I consider the problems more and more serious for the following reasons．（高分句型一）First of all，as is known to us，pets make too much noise that trouble residents a lot．What's more，（高分句型二）it's widely accepted that animal wastes pollute the environment，which makes people quite uncomfortale．Many owners like taking their pets to public places where they may frighten children or even sometimes bite people．（高分句型三）The most important is that pets can spread some disease and this has attracted much attention．
（高分句型四）Taking all these factors into consideration，I sencerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media to do something for it．
Yours faithfully，
Zhang Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文是一封書(shū)信應(yīng)用文，向報(bào)社反映目前人們?yōu)E養(yǎng)寵物的問(wèn)題．問(wèn)題提示較詳細(xì)，學(xué)生容易把握寫(xiě)作要求和寫(xiě)作目的．考生在寫(xiě)作之前要認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)作主要有三段內(nèi)容，第一段已經(jīng)給出，開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山表明要反映的問(wèn)題；第二段反映此問(wèn)題的原因及危害；第三段結(jié)束，提出自己的希望．另外，要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)用第三人稱(chēng)．再有就是不能根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容逐字逐句的翻譯形成漢式的英語(yǔ)，應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次．