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18．假定你是李華．你們班的外教Smith先生即將回國．你將代表全班在歡送會(huì)上發(fā)言．請(qǐng)你用英文發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括：
1．贊揚(yáng)Smith 的人品和工作．
2．感謝他在學(xué)習(xí)和生活中給予的幫助．
3．表達(dá)對(duì)Smith的祝福．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右．發(fā)言稿的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫．
Dear Mr．Smith，
It's hard to say"goodbye"．Words cannot convey our endless love and thanks to you，for you've done so much for us in these years．
（高級(jí)句型一）You are so humorous and easy-going that everyone wants to be your friends．（贊揚(yáng)Smith的人品和工作）We do appreciate the way of your teaching．It seems that you have magic to make your lectures lively and interesting．With your guidance，all of us have made great progress．You care about not only our study but also our life．（高分句型二）Whenever we're in trouble，you're always the first man we can depend on．（高分句型三）After class you often join us in games，during which we've shared much happiness．
（表達(dá)對(duì)史密斯的祝福）Thank you again for everything you've done for us．Wish you a safe journey home and a happy life in the future．
Yours
Li Hua
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Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇發(fā)言稿，采用三段式，內(nèi)容齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)合理．
（高級(jí)句型一）You are so humorous and easy-going that everyone wants to be your friends．
該句使用了so…that如此…以至于…引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句；
（高分句型二）Whenever we're in trouble，you're always the first man we can depend on．
whenever引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句，無論什么時(shí)候；
（高分句型三）After class you often join us in games，during which we've shared much happiness．
該句使用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，在which之前加介詞during，表示在…之后；
高級(jí)詞匯：humorous and easy-going 幽默，隨和；appreciate欣賞；not only…but also…不僅…而且；

解答 Dear Mr．Smith，
     It's hard to say"goodbye"．Words cannot convey our endless love and thanks to you，for you've done so much for us in these years．
（高級(jí)句型一）You are so humorous and easy-going that everyone wants to be your friends．（贊揚(yáng)Smith的人品和工作）We do appreciate the way of your teaching．It seems that you have magic to make your lectures lively and interesting．With your guidance，all of us have made great progress．You care about not only our study but also our life．（高分句型二）Whenever we're in trouble，you're always the first man we can depend on．（高分句型三）After class you often join us in games，during which we've shared much happiness．
    （表達(dá)對(duì)史密斯的祝福）Thank you again for everything you've done for us．Wish you a safe journey home and a happy life in the future．
                                                                                                                                                                                     Yours
                                                                                                                                                                                     Li Hua

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