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　　假如學(xué)校開(kāi)設(shè)的“英語(yǔ)角”本周五下午活動(dòng)，由你組織你班的活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你起草一份通知，向全班同學(xué)宣讀.

通知內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

(1) 前段時(shí)間，大部分同學(xué)積極參加英語(yǔ)角活動(dòng)，聽(tīng)力和口語(yǔ)水平提高很快；

(2) 本周星期五下午4：00--6：00在操場(chǎng)北邊的花壇周圍活動(dòng)；

(3) 參加人員：所有的學(xué)生都可以參加.本校的英語(yǔ)老師，包括你校的姊妹學(xué)校--來(lái)自美國(guó)俄亥俄州代頓中學(xué)(Dayton Middle School of Ohio)的25名學(xué)生.

(4) 請(qǐng)準(zhǔn)時(shí)參加，是與姊妹學(xué)校的學(xué)生交流、交友的好機(jī)會(huì).

注意：

(1) 不要逐條翻譯，力爭(zhēng)要點(diǎn)清晰，句子流暢.

(2) 詞數(shù)：100左右.

(3) 生詞：姊妹學(xué)校companion school．

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寫作思路點(diǎn)撥： (1) 人稱：第一人稱，第三人稱 (2) 時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，一般將來(lái)時(shí) (3) 短語(yǔ)：English Corner英語(yǔ)角；flower bed花壇；to the north of在……的北邊；most of us我們中大多數(shù)人；take part in參加；in the past前段時(shí)間；achieve progress取得進(jìn)步；listening English聽(tīng)力英語(yǔ)；speaking English口語(yǔ)英語(yǔ)；join in參加；what's more更重要的是；companion school姊妹學(xué)校；Dayton Middle School of Ohio美國(guó)俄亥俄州代頓中學(xué)；make friends with與……交朋友 (4) 要點(diǎn) 1)前段時(shí)間，大部分同學(xué)積極參加英語(yǔ)角活動(dòng)．聽(tīng)力和口語(yǔ)水平提高很快 2)本周星期五下午4：00--6：00在操場(chǎng)北邊的花壇周圍活動(dòng) 3)參加人員：所有的學(xué)生都可以參加，本校的英語(yǔ)老師及你校的姊妹學(xué)校， 來(lái)自美國(guó)俄亥俄州代頓中學(xué)的25名學(xué)生 4)這是與姊妹學(xué)校的學(xué)生交流、交友的好機(jī)會(huì)，請(qǐng)準(zhǔn)時(shí)參加. (5) 草擬要點(diǎn)成英語(yǔ) 1) most of the students to have taken an active part in the activity of“the English Corner”, to have achieved progress in listening and speaking English 2) to hold “the English Corner” between 4:00 and 6:00 p.m. this afternoon around the flower bed to the north of the playground 3) all the English teachers to join in the activity, 25 students from the companion school--Dayton Middle School of Ohio U.S.A. to join in “the English Corner” 4) to be a good chance for the students to communicate and make friends with them, not to miss it (6) 擴(kuò)展要點(diǎn)成句 1) Most of the students took an active part in the activity of “the English Comer”. Much progress in listening and speaking English has been achieved. 2) This afternoon “the English Corner” will be held between 4:00 and 6:00 p.m. around the flower bed to the north of the playground. 3) All the English teachers of the school will join in the activity, 25 students from the companion school--Dayton Middle School of Ohio U.S.A. will join in “the English Corner”. 4) This is a good chance for the students to communicate and make friends with them. Don't miss it. (7) 合理調(diào)整人稱，適當(dāng)調(diào)整句型，增加必要句型，擴(kuò)展要點(diǎn)成句 May I have your attention, please? I have something important to tell you. This afternoon “the English Corner” will be held between 4:00 and 6:00 p.m. around the flower bed to the north of the playground. Most of us took an active part in the activity in the past. And much progress in our listening and speaking English has been achieved. In the afternoon all the English teachers of our school will join us in the activity. What's more, 25 students from our companion school--Dayton Middle School of Ohio U.S.A. will join us in “the English Corner”. This is really a good chance for us to communicate and make friends with them. Don't miss it. (8) 語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用提示 這是一篇口頭通知，要用第一人稱口吻來(lái)寫，通知開(kāi)頭可用May I have your attention，please?來(lái)寫，以便引起通知對(duì)象的注意；表示將要發(fā)生的被動(dòng)動(dòng)作用將來(lái)完成時(shí)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)；表示現(xiàn)在完成的被動(dòng)動(dòng)作用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài).