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常言道: “一個成功孩子的背后是一個偉大的母親” (Behind each successful child is a great mother)。請結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷, 簡述你母親在生活和學(xué)習(xí)上對你的關(guān)愛與幫助, 并談?wù)勀銓δ笎鄣母惺堋?/p>

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As the saying goes, behind each successful child is a great mother. Nobody can achieve success without parental love and Mother’s devotion plays an especially critical role in our life. Mothers dedicate almost everything we need, which is a necessary part on our road to great achievements.
My mother always gives me a helping hand in both my studies and my life. Since she is a math teacher, whenever I meet with any difficulty in the subject, she is always patient to give me guidance. On the other hand, she takes care of me in my life like other devoted mothers. Whenever I fall ill she spares no efforts to help me recover from the illnesses. It’s impossible for me to grow up and achieve success in my life without my mother.
In fact, no matter whether you are successful or not, mothers always stand behind you and back you up. Everyone knows that mother’s love is just like a flowing river, and it keeps running forever, pushing and carrying you forward to your destination of life and work. And what we can do is never to stop halfway. Only in this way can we treasure and repay the sacrifice and devotion of our mothers.

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【亮點說明】As the saying goes, behind each successful child is a great mother. 這句話是非限制性定語從句， Mothers dedicate almost everything we need, which is a necessary part on our road to great achievements.這句話用了定語從句， Since she is a math teacher, whenever I meet with any difficulty in the subject, she is always patient to give me guidance. 這句話用了讓步狀語從句和原因狀語從句， Whenever I fall ill she spares no efforts to help me recover from the illnesses. 這句話也是讓步狀語從句和詞組：spares no efforts to do，It’s impossible for me to grow up and achieve success in my life without my mother.這句話用了it做形式主語，.And what we can do is never to stop halfway. 這句話里面有主語從句，Only in this way can we treasure and repay the sacrifice and devotion of our mothers.這句話用了倒裝句，還有文章用了 On the other hand,這樣的詞使文章更加連貫。
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