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5．近年來(lái)，微信（WeChat）成為人們?nèi)粘Ｉ�活中必不可少的通訊工具，尤其在今年春�?jié)期間，"微信搶紅包"熱（"Red envelope"fever）風(fēng)靡全國(guó)．請(qǐng)對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象寫(xiě)一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括以下幾點(diǎn)：
（1）使用微信的利與弊．
（2）自己的看法和建議．
要求：
（1）詞數(shù)：100詞左右．
（2）開(kāi)頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
In recent years，WeChat is becoming increasingly popular．
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Answer 1

分析 這是一篇要點(diǎn)文，討論微信搶紅包的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象．給出的要點(diǎn)是：利弊和自己的看法和建議．寫(xiě)作時(shí)要提煉出至少四個(gè)主要內(nèi)容，即利和弊，看法和建議．文章討論的是社會(huì)現(xiàn)象，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)即可；文章要求發(fā)表意見(jiàn)，以第一人稱來(lái)表達(dá)．
重要短語(yǔ)和句型：
sweep the country風(fēng)靡全國(guó)；
cut down減少；
the taste of the majority大多數(shù)人的口味；
reveal泄露；
WeChat is a relatively cheap way of communication，which cuts down the cost of making a phone call．
微信是一種便宜的交流方式，可以減少打電話的費(fèi)用．
There is some doubt that WeChat will improve as time goes by．
隨著時(shí)間的推移，人們對(duì)微信的發(fā)展還是有點(diǎn)不確定．

解答 參考答案：
In recent years，WeChat is becoming increasingly popular．"Red envelope"fever has swept the country especially during this Spring Festival．
There are many reasons for WeChat to be known．To begin with，WeChat is a relatively cheap way of communication，which cuts down the cost of making a phone call．（高分句型，定語(yǔ)從句）Next，WeChat is to the taste of the majority of people with the various functions； it is available everywhere at any time．
However，problems exist meanwhile．Firstly，our identity can be revealed and we can be in trouble．Moreover，it may make communicating with others face to face less．Finally，our attention might be drawn too much to focus on work．
There is some doubt that WeChat will improve as time goes by．（高分句型，同位語(yǔ)從句）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 書(shū)面表達(dá)題考查的是英語(yǔ)的應(yīng)用能力．寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意：要點(diǎn)的提煉要全；關(guān)鍵短語(yǔ)和句型要寫(xiě)對(duì)；過(guò)渡詞和過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)使用要正確．