假設(shè)你是李華,最近收到澳大利亞朋友Smith的來(lái)信,現(xiàn)在你給他回信介紹學(xué);厩闆r以及你的高中生活。

說明:

1. 學(xué)校建于1960年,有教學(xué)班48個(gè),教師280人,學(xué)生3200人。

2. 教學(xué)樓能容納60多個(gè)班;圖書館藏書20余萬(wàn)冊(cè);科技館有許多物理和化學(xué)實(shí)驗(yàn)室,四個(gè)語(yǔ)音教室。

3. 我在高一(四)班就讀。所學(xué)主要課程有:語(yǔ)文、數(shù)學(xué)、英語(yǔ)、物理、化學(xué)、電腦。

4. 擅長(zhǎng)英語(yǔ)和電腦;業(yè)余愛好:聽流行音樂,游泳和滑冰。

5. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),使內(nèi)容連貫。信的開頭已為你寫好。詞數(shù):100-120。

Dear Mr. Smith,

I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school and school life.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Dear MrSmith,

I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school and school life.

Our school was built in 1960. There are 48 classes with 3200 students and 280 teachers in it. When entering the school gate, you can see the library with over 200, 000 books. In the science hall, there are many physics and chemistry laboratories and four sound labs. The teaching building can hold sixty classes. I’m studying in Class4, Grade 1. The main subjects include Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer. I like English and computer best and I am very good at them. In my spare time, I enjoy listening to popular music, swimming and skating. I hope you will come and visit some day.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析:題目要求給澳大利亞朋友Smith寫一封回信,向他介紹學(xué)校的基本情況和你的高中生活。寫作要點(diǎn)包括:學(xué)校歷史和師生情況;教學(xué)設(shè)施;所學(xué)課程;業(yè)余愛好等四個(gè)方面。詞數(shù)在100詞到120詞之間,開頭不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);不要出現(xiàn)標(biāo)點(diǎn)和拼寫錯(cuò)誤,盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀;注意行文的連貫性。

亮點(diǎn)說明:范文涵蓋了所有的寫作要點(diǎn),進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣,并注意語(yǔ)句的連貫性;范文還使用了賓語(yǔ)從句、現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)等語(yǔ)法知識(shí),具備較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。

語(yǔ)法方面:with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)with 3200 students and 280 teachers in it;固定用法when entering the school gate;現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)I’m studying in Class4, Grade 1.;賓語(yǔ)從句you will come and visit some day等,顯示了較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)法功底,也使作文句式變得多樣;

篇章結(jié)構(gòu)方面:范文注意使用in the science hall, and, in my spare time等來(lái)銜接句子和段落,使表達(dá)變得更有條理;

短語(yǔ)和搭配方面:范文使用了like...best, be good at, enjoy doing, listen to等短語(yǔ)和搭配,使作文的內(nèi)容變得充實(shí)。

考點(diǎn):書信類作文

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