假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。作文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(＾)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

I have a good friend who name is Liu Mei．She is our monitor and one of the excellent student in our class．Clever as she is，but she works very hard．We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about. One evening，she told me that something happened when her parents was out．She was doing her homework one Sunday morning while she smelt something burning．She stopped look out of the window and found a cloud of smoke come out of her neighbor’s house．She called 119 immediate．Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire．Her neighbor was very thankful for her help．

1.who → whose

2.student →students

3.去掉but

4.on →in

5.was →were

6.while→ when

7.stopped→后面加to

8.come→ coming

9.immediate→ immediately

10.out后面加the

【解析】

試題分析：李梅是我的班長，并且是一名優(yōu)秀的學(xué)生。她不但聰明而且很努力。我們有著很多相似的地方，而且也經(jīng)常在一起聊天。她告訴我有一次她的父母不在家的時(shí)候，她家發(fā)生了火災(zāi)，她沉著冷靜，撥打了119，很快消防員趕到，把火撲滅了。

1. → whose 考查關(guān)系代詞。 I have a good friend who name is Liu Mei．定語從句中名詞name和先行詞之間是所屬關(guān)系，故把who改為whose。

2. →students 考查名詞。 She is our monitor and one of the excellent student in our class．One of后面跟名詞復(fù)數(shù)，故把student改為students。

3. 考查連詞。Clever as she is，but she works very hard．As引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句不和but連用，故把but去掉。

4. →in 考查介詞。We have a lot on common。固定短語：have sth in common “和某人有共同的地方”，故把on改為in。

5. →were 考查主謂一致。she told me that something happened when her parents was out．主語parents是復(fù)數(shù)名詞，謂語動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故把parent改為parents。

6. when 考查連詞。 She was doing her homework one Sunday morning while she smelt something burning．While引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句中的動(dòng)詞不能用延續(xù)性動(dòng)詞，故把while改為when。

7. 考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。 She stopped look out of the window. 固定短語：stop to do sth“停下來去做某事”，故在look前加to。

8. coming 考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。 and found a cloud of smoke come out of her neighbor’s house．固定短語：find sb doing sth “發(fā)現(xiàn)某人在做某事”，把come改為coming。

9. immediately 考查副詞。 She called 119 immediate．修飾動(dòng)詞call用副詞形式，故把immediate改為immediately。

10. 考查冠詞。Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire．上文提到過fire，再次出現(xiàn)用定冠詞the。

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