Question

7．你所在學校在校報上開辟英文專欄，邀請大家分享心目中的"最好禮物"．
【寫作內容】
假設你是李華，請根據以下信息用英文寫一篇文章，內容包括：

	禮物	意義
收到的最好禮物	明信片	1好朋友送給我的生日禮物 2朋友以我的名義捐贈免費早餐基金收到的明信片 3意味著我為貧困學童提供免費午餐
送出的最好禮物	洗腳盆	1送給父親的父親節(jié)禮物 2父親工作很辛苦，洗腳有助于放松 3有時可以幫父親洗腳，讓父親感受到孩子的關心

*免費早餐基金：Free Lunch**洗腳盆：foot basin
***以…的名義 in the name of
【寫作要求】
只能用5個句子表達全部內容；
【評分標準】
句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章結構連貫．

Answer 1

分析 本文采用了"表格+提綱類"形式，根據文章所給提示信息給校報英文專欄寫一篇文章，分享心目中的"最好禮物"．寫作要點：1．收到的最好禮物：明信片、意義2．送出的最好禮物：洗腳盆、意義．  既是提綱作文又是圖表類作文．寫作時時態(tài)以一般現在時和一般過去時為主．人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主．重要短語：donate sth to  （捐贈給…），in the name of （以…的名義），be deeply moved by （被深深地打動…），make contributions to doing （做貢獻…），as for （關于），not only…，but also…（不但…而且），feel one's affection （感受到某人的愛），care for （關心）．
【高分句型】
1．The best gift that I have ever received is a post card from my best friend as my birthday present．
這里是that引導的定語從句，先行詞是the best gift，that在定語從句中作receive的賓語．
2．①not only can my father relax himself after a day's hard work，but also sometimes I can help him wash his feet，②which can help him feel my affection and care for him．
這里是部分倒裝句型．"Not only+一般疑問句…，but also+…"，not only后的句子倒裝，而but also后的句子不倒裝．
②這里是which引導的非限制性定語從句，which在從句中作主語，指代前面整個句子的內容．

解答 The best gift that Ihave ever received is a post card from my best friend as my birthday present．【高分句型】It is a post card my friend received from Free Lunchbecause he had donated some money to this project in the name of me．I was deeply moved by this simple present because whatmy friend did means that I have made my contributions to helping buy the poorchildren free lunch．（收到的最好禮物：明信片、意義）
As for the best gift Ihave even given，I think it must be a foot basin for myfather as a Father's Day present．With it，not only can my father relax himself after a day's hardwork，but also sometimes I can help him wash his feet，which can help him feel my affection and care for him．【高分句型】（送出的最好禮物：洗腳盆、意義）

點評 寫好這類圖表及提綱式作文的關鍵是認真分析所給提示信息，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將要點完整地表述出來，并認真看圖，圍繞主題，提煉要點，發(fā)揮想象，語言力求準確、簡潔．選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等．