Question

假如你叫李平，你的朋友David寫信向你尋求戒掉網(wǎng)癮的辦法，來幫助他的弟弟。請你在回信中提出你的建議。要點(diǎn)如下：
* 像朋友一樣和他交流，讓他認(rèn)識到上網(wǎng)成癮的危害。
* 引導(dǎo)他說出自己的困惑或煩惱，這樣可以找出他對網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲依賴的原因。
* 幫助他培養(yǎng)有益于身心健康的愛好來轉(zhuǎn)移注意力。
* 向老師和父母求助，幫他限制上網(wǎng)時(shí)間并鼓勵(lì)他瀏覽既有吸引力又能開闊視野的網(wǎng)站。
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注意：1. 請不要逐句翻譯，應(yīng)適當(dāng)進(jìn)行發(fā)揮。
2. 詞數(shù)150 左右。信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)。
Dear David,
I feel sorry for your brother’s suffering from the Internet addiction. ____________________                                   ___                      __
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Yours sincerely,
Li Ping

Answer 1

Dear David,
I feel sorry for your brother’s suffering from the Internet addiction. But don’t be upset. I’ll give you some suggestions.
First of all, you should communicate with your brother like friends making him realize the negative effects of the addiction. Then, you can turn to your parents to limit the time spent on the Internet and ask your brother’s teachers to offer him some websites that are beneficial and attractive to him. I think in such interaction he might like to speak out his worries or puzzlement to all of you, which can help you find the reason why he is addicted to computer games. Last but not least, you can help him to develop some healthy interests such as sending him to some computer training class, going climbing with him to experience the nature, bringing him to go bungee jumping and many other sports which he may like.
I hope such tips can help him get out of the addiction as soon as possible.(156words) 
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文，需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫作時(shí)不要僅僅對要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文，一定要談?wù)勛约旱目捶�。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時(shí)注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)，不要太多也不要太少。
點(diǎn)評：本文屬于提綱作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。