【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(^ )，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

I am a Canadian girl aging 17 and I’ m mad about music. It is one of the most important thing in my life. I listen music whenever I can. I have a minidisk player, with it I can have access to music whether walking in the street or ride on the bike. At home, there is a CD player in my room, but music is on all the time. I like rock music better of all and my favorite band is Rolling stones. It so happened that there had a live concert of Rolling stones last Sunday. I went there and it was a great fun. I am also fond of classic music and I especial enjoy Beethoven when I’m doing my homework.

【答案】

【1】aging→aged

【2】thing→things

【3】listen后加to

【4】it→which

【5】ride→riding

【6】but→so或and

【7】better→best

【8】had→was

【9】去掉great fun 前面的a

【10】especial→especially;

【解析】

【1】age作動詞是，意思是：變成熟，上年紀，而aged…歲的。句意：我是一個17歲的加拿大女孩。所以aging→aged。

【2】one of 后面應(yīng)該用復數(shù)名詞，所以thing→things。

【3】listen是不及物動詞，聽音樂一個是：listen to music。

【4】逗號后的句子是非限制性定語從句，which是定語從句的關(guān)系代詞，代替前面的a minidisk player， it不能做定語從句的關(guān)系詞，如果逗號后面加一個and，本句也符合英語的習慣。

【5】whether… or …是并列連詞，連接兩個同等的形式，前面是walking in the street，所以后面也應(yīng)該是-ing短語，故ride→riding。

【6】句意：在我的家里也有一個CD播放機，所以音樂隨時都在，前后是并列關(guān)系而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，but→so或and。

【7】of all是比較范圍， 所以前面用最高級形式best。

【8】這里是there be 結(jié)構(gòu)，過去式單數(shù)用there was。

【9】fun是不可數(shù)名詞，所以去掉前的a。

【10】enjoy是動詞，一個用副詞修飾，所以especial→especially。

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