作文：假設(shè)你叫李華，是第三中學(xué)的學(xué)生，要給市長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)封信，反映學(xué)校門(mén)前交通擁擠的現(xiàn)象，包括以下要點(diǎn)：（詞數(shù)為120左右）。參考詞匯：天橋overpass

問(wèn)題

建議

1．學(xué)校和一所小學(xué)毗鄰，對(duì)著主干道，高峰期交通繁忙；

2．孩子年齡小，需要家長(zhǎng)接送，交通更擁擠；

3．學(xué)生過(guò)街時(shí)在車(chē)輛中穿行很危險(xiǎn)。

政府應(yīng)采取措施，如修過(guò)街天橋等。

 

 

 

 

 

Dear Mayor

I am a student of No.3 Middle School. Here I have something to tell you. Next to a primary school stands our school, facing a main street. When it comes to traffic jams, it’s crammed with cars during the rush hours. What makes things worse is that children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age. As a result, it’s of great danger for the students to go through the traffic. According to the phenomenon stated above, I think it’s high time that the government took some measures such as building an overpass to make sure the students are safe when crossing the road.

I’m looking forward to you reply.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】這是一篇寫(xiě)信的書(shū)面表達(dá)，而且是寫(xiě)給市長(zhǎng)的信，內(nèi)容表達(dá)三個(gè)問(wèn)題一個(gè)建議。內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給定，語(yǔ)言的流暢性和語(yǔ)法的正確性來(lái)評(píng)分?jǐn)?shù)了。也要寫(xiě)信的稱(chēng)呼落款格式的規(guī)范性。

本文結(jié)構(gòu)上運(yùn)用兩段式。第一段交代身份，問(wèn)題和建議，第二段是書(shū)信的常用結(jié)束語(yǔ)，期待對(duì)方的回信。重點(diǎn)賞析第一段的語(yǔ)法亮點(diǎn)。Next to，facing a main street. What在陳述建議的三個(gè)句子里，用了三個(gè)不同的句式來(lái)說(shuō)明，第一個(gè)到倒裝句，第二個(gè)獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)，主語(yǔ)從句，既體現(xiàn)作者英語(yǔ)功底凡，又見(jiàn)作者客觀(guān)的陳述事實(shí)。在提出建議的部分，作者用到了According to ，I think it’s high time that，according to把事實(shí)與分析銜接得恰到好處，而I think it’s high time that用虛擬語(yǔ)氣建議提得委婉得體。

考點(diǎn):考查書(shū)信類(lèi)應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作

 

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