Question

3．請根據(jù)如圖寫一篇100-120個詞的短文．你的短文應(yīng)包括下列要點：
1．簡要描寫圖畫內(nèi)容；
2．說明圖畫含義；
3．表達你的觀點．
注意：
短文開頭已給出（不計詞數(shù)）；
As is shown in the picture above，                              ．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的圖片信息，寫一篇英語短文，寫作時人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．寫作要點：1．簡要描寫圖畫內(nèi)容；2．說明圖畫含義；3．表達你的觀點．
重要短語：deal with（處理，涉及）；make a living （謀生）；era（時代）；be supposed to（應(yīng)該）；work hard（努力學(xué)習(xí)/工作）；
                let alone （更不必說，聽任）；lead to （導(dǎo)致）；take sth seriously（認真對待某事）；solve（解決）．
高分句型：1．However，he doesn't seem so confident so for as creativity is concerned，which is very common among us Chinese student．
                 這里關(guān)系代詞which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，which指代前面he doesn't seem so confident so for as creativity is concerned這件事．
                 2．it's difficult to make a living without knowledge，let alone contributions to society．
                 在這個句子中，it是形式主語，真正的主語是不定式短語 to make a living without knowledge．
                 3．However，if we try to learn knowledge at the cost of losing creativity，it may lead to serious consequences for our nation．
                  這是一個if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句的復(fù)合句．

解答 As is shown in the picture above，the graduate，after years of hard work and tough training，displays superb abilities in dealing with exams of all kinds．However，he doesn't seem so confident so for as creativity is concerned，which is very common among us Chinese students（高分句型一）．
    Admittedly，in today's era of knowledge economy，it's difficult to make a living  without knowledge，let alone contributions to society（高分句型二）．So we are supposed to work hard to lay a solid foundation for the future．However，if we try to learn knowledge at the cost of losing creativity，it may lead to serious consequences for our nation（高分句型三）．
      I think we must take the problem seriously and efforts must be made to solve it．We hope Chinese students will not only do well in the exams but also excel in creativity（個人觀點和期望）．

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．