Question

7．假設(shè)你是某國際學(xué)校高二（1）班的學(xué)生Jack，你的美國朋友Peter來信說要來北京游玩．請根據(jù)下面提供的信息，給Peter寫一封回信，內(nèi)容包括：
1．建議他游覽故宮及周邊景區(qū)；
2．建議的理由；
3．祝愿…．
注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于80；  2．回信開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Peter，
I am pleased to hear that you are coming to Beijing soon．
                                                  
Yours，
Jack．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們來信給要來北京游玩的美國朋友Peter寫一封回信，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達(dá)出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般將來時，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：建議他游覽故宮及周邊景區(qū)；建議的理由；祝愿…．我們此篇作文分為三部分，第一部分為建議他游覽故宮及周邊景區(qū)．第二部分為建議的理由．第三部分為祝愿．
重點(diǎn)短語與句型：
 advise sb  to do sth 建議某人做某事
Palace Museum 故宮
hang out 閑逛，游蕩
高分句型一：I'd like to advise you to visit the Palace Museum，which is located in the centre of Beijing．此句用了非限制性定語從句高分句型二：The Palace Museum，the largest museum in China was established during the Ming Dynasty and then passed on to the Qing Dynasty，housing a large valuable collection of royal family treasures．此句用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語作后置定語

解答 Dear Peter，
I am pleased to hear that you are coming to Beijing soon．I'd like to advise you to visit the Palace Museum，which is located in the centre of Beijing．（高分句型一）The Palace Museum，the largest museum in China was established during the Ming Dynasty and then passed on to the Qing Dynasty，housing a large valuable collection of royal family treasures（高分句型二）．After visiting the Palace Museum，you can take a trip around it．There are some other well-known museums，parks and commercial centres nearby，such as Chinese History Museum，Beihai Park and Wang Fujing Street etc．（建議他游覽故宮及周邊景區(qū)）
The public transport around is very convenient，You can choose to take subways，buses or taxis．You can also rent a bicycle and hang out on it around．You are sure to enjoy your ride．（建議的理由）
Wish you a good trip in Beijing．（祝愿）
Yours，
Jack

點(diǎn)評 第一步：審題，確定體裁格式、主體時態(tài)、中心人稱和內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，避免填表式或履歷表式表達(dá)．
第二步：擬定提綱，創(chuàng)造良好的開端；敘述得體，布局謀篇；巧妙過渡，完美結(jié)尾．
第三步：遣詞造句，上下銜接，地道表達(dá)，行文成篇（注意"參考詞匯"的提示作用）．