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學(xué)校計(jì)劃舉行英語(yǔ)作文競(jìng)賽，主題為“We Need Advice from Older Generations”。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要求寫一篇100-120詞的作文：

你遇到了困難或問題，不知該怎么辦。你去請(qǐng)教一位長(zhǎng)輩，后來(lái)問題得到了解決。要求寫清楚下面三點(diǎn)：

1． 當(dāng)時(shí)面臨的困難或問題是什么？

2． 你獲得的指教是什么？

3． 結(jié)果如何？

注意：不能在作文中出現(xiàn)所在學(xué)校的校名和本人姓名。

【答案】

One year ago, I was in great trouble. I worked hard at English and devoted all my spare time to practising English. But I failed to pass the mid-term examination. I felt very disappointed.

So I asked my grandpa for advice when I went home. Hearing what I told him, he said examination resulted more or less on a fortuitous phenomenon. We can’t judge our improvement only by one examination. He encouraged me to stick to working hard for a long time to check my results.

I took my grandpa’s advice and have been doing it as he told me to since then. Now my English is much better than before. From my experience, I feel that we need advice from older generation.

【解析】

試題分析：本文的主題是我們需要來(lái)自老一輩的建議，本文貼近自己的生活，比較有話說(shuō)。對(duì)于此類文章，要注意一下幾點(diǎn)：1、首先，要根據(jù)自己的實(shí)際生活經(jīng)歷來(lái)描寫你因?yàn)榕c問題而去請(qǐng)教一位長(zhǎng)輩，后來(lái)問題得到了解決的實(shí)踐；2、其次，描述事件的原因、過(guò)程、結(jié)果時(shí)，可以多用一些連接詞來(lái)時(shí)文章順暢；3、最后，要注意點(diǎn)出文章的主題，文章的主題要與所寫內(nèi)容有關(guān)；4、注意單詞、詞組、句式的運(yùn)用來(lái)給文章增色。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】在對(duì)于諸如此類文章的寫作，要善于使用不同的句型。英語(yǔ)的寫作過(guò)程中切忌使用重復(fù)的表達(dá)，對(duì)于不會(huì)表達(dá)的意思要學(xué)會(huì)替換。文章按照時(shí)間順序來(lái)寫，使用了One year ago，since then，Now 這樣的時(shí)間副詞來(lái)連接文章。學(xué)生在寫作時(shí)也要注意用平時(shí)在課本中或是閱讀中積累的單詞句型來(lái)自如的表達(dá)自己的意思，本文運(yùn)用了in great trouble處于巨大的困難中，devoted all my spare time to付出了我全部的課余時(shí)間，stick to堅(jiān)持等短語(yǔ)。本文也有很多句型值得學(xué)習(xí)，如Hearing what I told him, he said examination resulted more or less on a fortuitous phenomenon. 運(yùn)用了非謂語(yǔ)形式，這樣文章才能寫出新意。最后的結(jié)尾From my experience, I feel that we need advice from older generation.點(diǎn)出了文章的主題。

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