Question

【題目】假如你是李華，今年的中國國際旅游節(jié)下個月將在你們城市舉行，組委會擬招聘一些高中生擔任英語導(dǎo)游，你打算應(yīng)聘。請根據(jù)下列內(nèi)容要點給組委會寫一封申請信。

1．自我介紹(年齡、性別等)；

2．英語水平(口語表達能力等)；

3．特殊優(yōu)勢(相關(guān)經(jīng)歷、對當?shù)芈糜尉包c的了解、溝通能力等)；

4．你的承諾。

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計人總詞數(shù)；

3．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Sir/Madam,

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Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m very glad to know that China International Tourism Festival will be held in our city next month. I’m writing to apply for an English tour guide for the festival.

My name is Li Hua. I’m a boy of 17, a Senior 2 student in a high school. I believe I am gualified for the job. Here are my qualifications. First of all, speaking a so fluent English will help me have no trouble in communicating with foreign tourists. Secondly, I’m fond of traveling and I’ve worked as an English tour guide at several great festivals in our city before, which allows me to be experienced. Most importantly, I know our local tourist spots so well that I am more equal to the job than others. At the same time, I have a good command of communicating.

I promise I’ll try to offer my best services to the travelers from all over the world. I would be very happy if I could be chosen as a tour guide.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】本題的考點為應(yīng)聘求職信，主要結(jié)構(gòu)是:

1) 說明寫作目的。表明想要獲得什么工作職位，介紹自己，為什么寫信，可以用一句話概括。

2) 介紹相關(guān)工作經(jīng)歷及本人優(yōu)勢，以表明你可以勝任這個職位。包括教育背景、工作經(jīng)歷、個人能力及成就等。還可根據(jù)情況簡單介紹個人愛好和興趣。

注意：所有這些內(nèi)容均應(yīng)與應(yīng)聘工作有關(guān)系。介紹背景時，選詞遣字既不過分渲染，又不過分謙虛。要給人留下既充滿信心又態(tài)度誠懇的印象。

3) 表示感謝和期待，懇請招聘單位對自己的申請給予優(yōu)先考慮，作出必要的承諾并對對方表示感謝。

注意：因為求職信是在請求別人考慮你的申請，考慮給你機會，所以禮貌語氣是必要的，也是重要的。

【本文亮點】本文在介紹自己相關(guān)經(jīng)歷及本人優(yōu)勢的時候，簡單句、并列句、復(fù)合句交錯使用，增強了文章的可讀性。另外，first of all , secondly, most importantly, at the same time等等的使用，使得層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。