Question

【題目】假如你是李華，半個月前你給澳大利亞好友Jack郵寄了一些口罩以幫助他和家人防范新冠肺 炎。請給他寫一封電子郵件詢問他是否收到口罩并告知他一些防范經驗，內容包括：

1 .表達關心；

2．詢問口罩是否收到；

3.介紹防范經驗。

注意：1.詞數：100左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：新冠肺炎COVID - 19 口罩surgical mask

Dear Jack,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dec Jack,

At COVID - 15 it still spreading and threatening the world, I'm concerned about you and your family. I mailed some surgical masks to you days ago, and now I'm writing to ask whether you have received them.

As is known, my country has effectively had COVID -19 under control, so I want to share some experience of fighting against the virus with you. Firstly, try to stay at home, measure your body temperature regularly and wash your hands often. Besides, wear a mask when you go out and don't gather with others. Most importantly, go to see the doctor immediately if you feel uncomfortable.

I hope my suggestions will be of help to you. Best wishes!

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇屬于應用文，要求考生寫電子郵件詢問好友情況，并給出防范疫情的建議。

第一步：審題

體裁：應用文

時態(tài)：根據提示，時態(tài)應為現在完成時和一般現在時

結構：總分總

郵件類的結構首段表示問候，分段給出建議，尾段表示祝愿。

要求：1. 問候好友近況。

2.具體闡述給好友的建議

1) 建議1 (example 1)

2) 建議2 (example 2)

3) 建議3 (conclusion)

3. 表達對好友的祝愿。

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

threaten; be concerned about; surgical masks; under control; measure body temperature; gather with

第三步：連詞成句

1. At COVID - 15 it still spreading and threatening the world, I'm concerned about you and your family.

2. I mailed some surgical masks to you days ago,

3. my country has effectively had COVID -19 under control,

4. measure your body temperature regularly and wash your hands often.

5. wear a mask when you go out and don't gather with others.

根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結構順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補充關系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉折對比關系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改