Question

11．假如你是李華，你的朋友王強(qiáng)最近因英語口語不好而苦惱．請你根據(jù)以下提示，給他寫一封信，提出你的看法和建議．
1．課上，積極發(fā)言；課下，多交流；
2．勇于展示自我，不怕被嘲笑；
3．堅(jiān)持不懈，終會(huì)進(jìn)步．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Wang Qiang，
I am sorry to hear that you have trouble with spoken English．
Don't worry!Here is some of my advice on how to improve it．
First of all，nothing is better than drills．Therefore，in class you'd better seize every opportunity to express your ideas，while after class it's a good idea to communicate with your classmates in English．Keep in mind practice makes perfect．Besides，don't be afraid of making mistakes and being laughed at by others．On the contrary，be confident and brave to show yourself．Finally，it is the persistence that will make a difference to your spoken English．In other words，as long as you keep on speaking English，you are sure to make progress in spoken English．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是李華給朋友王強(qiáng)寫的一封信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一寫明書信目的；二學(xué)習(xí)英語口語的看法和建議．高分句型：1．Therefore，in class you'd better seize every opportunity to express your ideas，while after class it's a good idea to communicate with your classmates in English．句子里r seize every opportunity to表示"抓住每一個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)去做"；while表達(dá)對比關(guān)系，翻譯成"然而，同時(shí)"；it做形式主語，代指 to communicate with your classmates in English．因此，在課堂上抓住每一個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)去做表達(dá)自己的想法，同時(shí)課下多和同學(xué)用英語交流是一個(gè)好主意．2．Finally，it is the persistence that will make a difference to your spoken English．句子里it is…that是強(qiáng)調(diào)句式，強(qiáng)調(diào)主語 the persistence； make a difference to時(shí)固定短語，表示"對某事有影響"．最后，堅(jiān)持不懈會(huì)使你的英語有進(jìn)步．

解答 Dear Wang Qiang，
     I'm sorry to hear that you have trouble with your spoken English．Don't worry!Here is some of my advice on how to improve it．（寫明書信目的）
    First of all，nothing is better than drills．Therefore，in class you'd better seize every opportunity to express your ideas，while after class it's a good idea to communicate with your classmates in English．【高分句型一】Keep in mind practice makes perfect．Besides，don't be afraid of making mistakes and being laughed at by others．On the contrary，be confident and brave to show yourself．Finally，it is the persistence that will make a difference to your spoken English．【高分句型二】In other words，as long as you keep on speaking English，you are sure to make progress in spoken English．（學(xué)習(xí)英語口語的看法和建議）
                                                       
 Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 考查提綱類作文．寫作時(shí)，在體裁明確、中心突出、要點(diǎn)清晰的前提下，應(yīng)該選擇自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞語、句型，將要點(diǎn)逐條表達(dá)出來．表達(dá)時(shí)應(yīng)該綜合運(yùn)用所掌握的知識，避開生僻的詞匯，并克服母語的干擾，按照英語的習(xí)慣方式，用地道的英語表達(dá)出來，力求做到語言準(zhǔn)確無誤．