Question

11．隨著微博的普及，許多行業(yè)精英或公眾人物通過微博發(fā)布消息和表達觀點，給社會帶來 不同影響．現(xiàn)在，請你用英語就此寫篇簡評，內(nèi)容包括：
1．上述情況日趨普遍；
2．這種做法的利與弊；
3．微博是否應(yīng)受到監(jiān)管？為什么？
注意：1．詞數(shù)：120字左右；
2．參考詞匯：微博 micro-blogs n （pl．）
行業(yè)精英 industry elites n．（pl）
Micro-blogs，a new format of communication，are becoming more and more popular．Many industry elites or public figures post news or express ideas through micro-blogs，which has produced different impacts on society．Generally speaking，most of them use micro-blogs to convey positive messages to the public．For example，they encourage people to help those who badly need help．However，some of them behave differently．Sometimes their micro-blogs are full of dirty words，gossip or rumors，which has a bad effect on the people around them．Therefore，any improper message posted there should be deleted by the website operators and that's their duty，I think，for micro-blogs are just like a real world，where everybody should obey the laws and the moral codes，and no absolute freedom should exist there at all．Only in this way can people tell right from wrong without misled．

Answer 1

分析 亮點句型一：Many industry elites or public figures post news or express ideas through micro-blogs，which has produced different impacts on society許多行業(yè)精英或公眾人物通過信息發(fā)布新聞或表達思想，這對社會產(chǎn)生不同的影響．此處which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，which指代前面整個句子的意思．
亮點句型二：Only in this way can people tell right from wrong without misled．本句是一個倒裝句，only引導(dǎo)的狀語至于句首，主句要做部分倒裝．

解答 Micro-blogs，a new format of communication，are becoming more and more popular．Many industry elites or public figures post news or express ideas through micro-blogs，which has produced different impacts on society（亮點句型一）．【闡明現(xiàn)象】Generally speaking，most of them use micro-blogs to convey positive messages to the public．For  example，they encourage people to help those who badly need help．However，some of them behave differently．Sometimes their micro-blogs are full of dirty words，gossip or rumors，which has a bad effect on the people around them．Therefore，any improper message posted there should be deleted by the website operators and that's their duty．【現(xiàn)象的利與弊】I think，for micro-blogs are just like a real world，where everybody should obey the laws and the moral codes，and no absolute freedom should exist there at all．Only in this way can people tell right from wrong without misled．（亮點句型二）【闡述觀點】

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．