Question

假如你叫李華,你校的外教Smith夫婦刊登了一則廣告在你校網(wǎng)頁(yè)上,他們要在假期招聘一名臨時(shí)保姆(babysitter),請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示給他們寫(xiě)一封電子郵件應(yīng)聘。 注意:詞數(shù)100左右。

★你有照顧孩子的經(jīng)驗(yàn)；

★擅長(zhǎng)烹飪,符合對(duì)方的要求。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith,

I am Li Hua. I know from the advertisement on the web that you are looking for a babysitter. I’m really interested in the job and want to apply for it. I’m confident that I’m qualified to do it. On the one hand, I’m looking for a part-time job for the summer vacation; on the other hand, I’m experienced in taking care of kids. I used to help my aunt look after my younger brother.

I got the love of teaching children from my mother who is a kindergarten teacher. Besides, I learned to cook when I was still in primary school and now I’m really a good cook. In fact, the whole family enjoys the food I make.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,   

lihua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文，需要寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文，一定要談?wù)勛约旱目捶āＰ枰�注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時(shí)注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)，不要太多也不要太少。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。