Question

2．閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文．
What can you do when you are unhappy？If you want to let out your anger or pressure by breaking things，you just do．Now a school in Nanjing has built a"stress wall"to help students who feel unhappy due to heavy schoolwork or for other reasons．
The leader of the school said the idea of a stress wall started when footprints were found on some newly painted walls and some school windows were broken．
"These things happen because some students feel lots of pressure from their studies or because they don't get along well with other students．When under stress，the body gets ready to either run or fight and becomes very nervous．Hitting the wall can help relax the body and take away stress，"he said．
"Tests and homework make me sad，"said a junior girl，"I can't wait to hit the wall．It will help me a lot with my problems．"However，another girl student who wouldn't give her name said，"The wall won't help because it can't talk，"and she added，"I need to talk to someone when I'm sad．"
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1．以約30個詞概括這段短文內(nèi)容；
2．以約120個詞就"Should the stress wall be bulit"主題發(fā)表你的看法，包括以下要點：
（1）學(xué)生的壓力來源；
（2）是否該建此墻并說明理由；
（3）提供一些其他有效的減壓方法．
【寫作要求】
1．可以參照閱讀材料但不得直接引用原文的句子；
2．作文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
【評分標準】
概括準確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）students are under great pressure，mainly coming from their school work as well as peer relationship．
該句使用coming from現(xiàn)在分詞做定語，使用了非謂語動詞．
（高分句型二）For another，this may lead to the results of solving a problem with violence of fixing a bad temper，which has bad effects on their health growth．
which引導(dǎo)一個非限制邢定語從句，which指代前面句子內(nèi)容．
高分句型三）it is strongly suggested that we can take part in some sports events，which can surely help students out of stress and improve their health at the same time．
該句使用了it isstrongly suggested that 意思是據(jù)建議這個主語從句句型．
（高分句型四）only when we let out the stress properly can we live a happy school life．
在這個句子了使用only+when時間狀語從句，主句使用倒裝句．
還有重要短語如：As far as I am concerned就我所知；for one thing…for another一方面，另一方面；
lead to 導(dǎo)致；have effects on對…有影響．

解答 The passage conveys to us that to help students with stress，a school built a"stress wall"for students to relax，towards which students hold different opinions．
   Nowadays，（高分句型一）students are under great pressure，mainly coming from their school work as well as peer relationship．As far as I am concerned，building a stress wall is not appropriate．（列舉理由）For one thing，even if students punch the wall heavily，the true stress in the bottom of their hearts can not be let out．（高分句型二）For another，this may lead to the results of solving a problem with violence of fixing a bad temper，which has bad effects on their health growth．
    In order to decrease our stress，here are my suggestions．（我的建議）To begin with，we can design more outdoor activities for students to get rid of the stress．What's more，（高分句型三）it is strongly suggested that we can take part in some sports events，which can surely help students out of stress and improve their health at the same time．All in all，（高分句型四）only when we let out the stress properly can we live a happy school life．

點評 該書面表達為讀寫任務(wù)型作文，該篇作文規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了相應(yīng)的寫作要點．考生在平時應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯和短語，在寫作時盡量做到將要點與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文展示出來．