【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同學(xué)寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧）,并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Yesterday morning, I was surprising to hear that my best friend Allee has been hit by a car and was in hospital. The other day when he was going to cross a street, he was such careful that he didn’t go until he saw the traffic light to turn green. But hardly had he got to the middle of the street while he saw a car suddenly appear on his right-hand side and come towards them. It was too late for Allee to escape. He was hit by the car or was thrown a few meters away. He was sent to the nearest hospital immediately and had operation. When I went to see him, he was out of dangers but still looked pale. I sincere hope he will recover and return to normal as soon as possible.

【答案】

【1】surprising 改成surprised

【2】has 改成had

【3】such改成so

【4】to turn green的to去掉

【5】while改成when

【6】them改成him

【7】or改成and

【8】had和operation中間加an

【9】dangers改成danger

【10】sincere改成sincerely

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于記敘文，敘述了我的朋友Allee被汽車(chē)撞倒的詳細(xì)情況。

【1】surprising 改成surprised 考查形容詞。形容詞surprising令人驚訝的，通常修飾事物；surprised感到驚訝的，通常修飾人或與人有關(guān)的事物。本句主語(yǔ)是I，所以使用形容詞surprised。

【2】has 改成had 考查時(shí)態(tài)。本句的主語(yǔ)是was，可知Allen被撞是在我聽(tīng)說(shuō)之前就已經(jīng)發(fā)生的事情，所以使用過(guò)去完成時(shí)had been hit。

【3】such改成so 考查固定句式。so的后面通常要接形容詞或副詞，構(gòu)成“so+形容詞/副詞+that....”。而such的后面通常要接名詞或名詞短語(yǔ)，構(gòu)成“such+名詞/名詞短語(yǔ)+that....”。所以本句中形容詞careful的前面要加so。

【4】to turn green的to去掉 考查固定結(jié)構(gòu)。固定結(jié)構(gòu)see sb/sth do sth看見(jiàn)sb/sth做了某事，do前面省略了不定式符號(hào)to；本句中的see the traffic light turn green看見(jiàn)交通燈變綠。

【5】while改成when 考查固定句式。句式hardly...when...一...就....；句意：他一到路中央就看見(jiàn)一輛汽車(chē)突然出現(xiàn)并朝他沖了過(guò)來(lái)。

【6】them改成him 考查代詞。本文敘述的是Allee被撞的事情，所以使用代詞him指代Allee，因?yàn)榇~them指代復(fù)數(shù)名詞。

【7】or改成and 考查連詞。句意：他被汽車(chē)撞了并扔掉幾米之外。上下文之間是并列關(guān)系，所以使用連詞and，而不是or。

【8】had和operation中間加an 考查定冠詞。本句中名詞operation手術(shù)是一個(gè)可數(shù)名詞，不定冠詞an表示泛指，短語(yǔ)have an operation做手術(shù)。

【9】dangers改成danger 考查固定搭配。短語(yǔ)out of danger擺脫危險(xiǎn)；句意：當(dāng)我去看他的時(shí)候，他已經(jīng)脫離了危險(xiǎn)，但是看起來(lái)仍然臉色蒼白。

【10】sincere改成sincerely 考查副詞。本句中副詞sincerely作為狀語(yǔ)修飾謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞hope，我真誠(chéng)地希望....；英語(yǔ)中的形容詞通常作為定語(yǔ)或者表語(yǔ)，不能做狀語(yǔ)修飾動(dòng)詞。

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