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20．眾所周知，每個(gè)人都希望能保持一份好心情，因?yàn)楹眯那閷?duì)于我們的學(xué)習(xí)和工作都非常重要．因此，如何保持一份好心情就成了大家關(guān)心的話題．根據(jù)下面的提示和要求寫一篇英文演講稿，并就如何保持好心情談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />為什么要保持好心情：
1． 促進(jìn)工作和學(xué)習(xí)，提高生活質(zhì)量；             2． 有利于身心健康．
如何保持一份好心情：
1． 保持幽默感；    2． 擁有廣泛的興趣愛好；   3． 為人友好，多與人分享樂趣．
注意：詞數(shù)100左右
參考詞匯：促進(jìn) promote     心情 mood
Good morning，everyone!
The topic of my speech today is"How to keep a good mood"．      ．
That's all．Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類演講稿，根據(jù)提示信息如何保持一份好心情就成了大家關(guān)心的話題．寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)：為什么要保持好心情；如何保持一份好心情2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：life quality生活質(zhì)量；Besides另外；stay healthy 保持健康；widen our horizons 拓展視野；make progress取得進(jìn)步；have a good state of mind擁有好的心態(tài)

解答 Good morning，everyone!
    The topic of my speech today is"How to keep a good mood"．
     As we all know，a good mood is very important for our study and life．（高分句型）It can help promote our work and improve our life quality．Besides，if we are in a good mood，we will have fewer illnesses and worries．In this way，we can stay healthy and live longer．
To keep a good mood，we should do the following things．（高分句型）First，we should maintain a good sense of humor．Second，we should take up some hobbies，which will widen our horizons and add pleasure to our daily life．（高分句型）Third，it is very important for us to be friendly，communicate openly，and share our interests and pleasures with others as much as possible．Finally，we should keep calm and try to overcome our difficulties when facing them and try to make progress in our study and life．（0高分句型）
    In a word，if we can follow the above suggestions，I am sure we will have a good state of mind all the time．（0高分句型）
    That's all．Thank you!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 應(yīng)該注意適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，比如適當(dāng)選用表示因果、遞進(jìn)、轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的連接詞，使文章流暢、通順，并避免因反復(fù)使用句式相同的簡(jiǎn)單句而造成的單調(diào)感．（1）認(rèn)真審題，確定體裁． （2）構(gòu)思要點(diǎn)．根據(jù)題目要求，理解要表達(dá)的要點(diǎn)．設(shè)計(jì)好文章的層次段落，考慮所用時(shí)態(tài)、人稱等，把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來(lái)，構(gòu)成文章框架．（3）選詞造句，避難選易．（4）認(rèn)真檢查，避免錯(cuò)誤．仔細(xì)閱讀全文，查找是否有錯(cuò)，注意時(shí)態(tài)、單詞拼寫、字母大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)是否有誤，句式是否正確．邏輯是否一致．