Question

【題目】假定你是中學(xué)生李華，你的美國筆友Paul想了解一下中國的用餐習(xí)俗。請寫一封英文郵件向他作簡要介紹。要點如下：

1. 主人請客人先人座；

2. 使用筷子進(jìn)餐；

3. 吃飯不出聲響;.

4. 客人先動筷子；

5. 餐畢客人向主人致謝。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Paul,

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Paul,

You mentioned you are interested in Chinese table manners, so I’m writing to give you a brief introduction.

When a dinner begins, the host will invite the guests to get seated first.Then one major feature you should remember in China is that we use chopsticks instead of knife and fork,and everyon should try to avoid making unpleasant noise while eating. Whenever a dih is served,the guests are supposed to try it first.Of course,as guests,we should express our thanks to the host after enjoying the dinner.

Sush are the badic tips about Chinese table manners.All in all, When in China,do as the Chinese do is your best choice.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】這篇作文要求給Paul寫一封郵件，介紹中國的用餐習(xí)俗。文章應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。文章宜分為三部分：第一部分，表明寫信的目的。第二部分，介紹題目中要求的要點（1. 主人請客人先人座；2. 使用筷子進(jìn)餐；3. 吃飯不出聲響;.4. 客人先動筷子；5. 餐畢客人向主人致謝。）。第三部分，書信的末尾寫上適當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)束語，可以表示祝愿，也可以表示期望等。

【亮點分析】詞語，短語應(yīng)用非常到位，順暢。文章采用了be interested in， get seated，instead of，avoid doing，serve，express sth. to sb.，all in all等表達(dá)。此外，文章還使用了定語從句（you should remember in China），同位語從句（that we use chopsticks …and everyon should try to…）等高級句式。長短句結(jié)合，要點明確。