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【題目】假定你是李華。校英文報Growing pains欄目專門解答中學生的煩惱問題。現(xiàn)欄目收到一封來信。請根據(jù)這封信的內(nèi)容寫一封回信。

Dear Editor,

I am really angry with my parents recently. Next Sunday is my birthday. My parents promised to buy a cell phone for me as my birthday present this year. But now when I ask about the birthday present they say they have changed their ideas, because they worry about my study if I get a new cell phone since the final exam is coming soon. They say a cell phone may take up too much of my time. I believe I am old enough to control myself, but they don’t believe me. What’s more, they broke their promise!

Li Yan

內(nèi)容要求：

1.理解父母良苦用心；

2.手機有利有弊；

3.給出你的建議。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好。

Dear Li Yan,

It’s normal to have these feelings.___________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I hope things will be better for you soon!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Li Yan,

It’s normal to have these feelings. As a saying says, to be appreciated as a parent is quite unusual. It is quite sure that parents are willing to do their best to give us as possible as they can. We should understand the good intentions of parents. They must have been for your own good. As a high school student, our studies are important and very heavy. There are many advantages of mobile phone, checking dictionaries, listening to music, checking information and so on. But there is also a lot of harm, such as improper use, indeed affect the study and life. We should try our best to study hard and make great progress.

I hope things will be better for you soon!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本題考查書信類作文。首先要認真審題，假定你是李華，校英文報Growing pains欄目專門解答中學生的煩惱問題�，F(xiàn)欄目收到一封來信。請根據(jù)這封信的內(nèi)容寫一封回信。其次要確定時態(tài)，表示經(jīng)�；蚍磸桶l(fā)生的事情，所以這篇文章要使用一般現(xiàn)在時。然后要確定文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，文章開頭要說明理解父母的良苦用心，接著說明使用手機的利弊，文章最后提出自己的建議。在寫作過程中，上下文意思要連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合題目所給出的信息，不要出現(xiàn)偏題問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有文采。正確使用寫信的格式，詞數(shù)控制在一百左右。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。例如 ：As a saying says俗話說得好，try one’s best to do sth. 盡某人最大的努力做某事，學習中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。另外這篇短文還使用了一些高級句型。例如：It is quite sure that parents are willing to do their best to give us as possible as they can. 這里含有一個主語從句。