Question

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

Dear editor,

I have been getting along well with my father. However, as I’m in Senior Three now, the question whether I should live at school or come back home for the nights has come to our family discussion. My father and I have different opinions over the matter and we are arguing over it these days.

My father insists that I should live at school. In the previous two years, I have been spending about 80 minutes every day to and from school. Living at school can help save a lot of time. In this way, I can have more time for my studies.

On the other hand, what I believe is that I should spend my nights at home. First of all, if I come home for the nights, I will have more freedom to arrange my studies. Meanwhile, I will have more time to communicate with my parents, which will make us understand each other better.

I don’t want to make compromises（妥協(xié)） and neither does my father, as it seems. Could you tell me what I should do? I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.

Your sincere reader,

Teddy

【寫作內(nèi)容】

假設(shè)你是某英文報社的編輯，讀了Teddy的來信后，想告訴他你的看法。以下是你回信的內(nèi)容：

1. 以約30個詞概括以上短文的內(nèi)容。

2. 以約120個詞表達你對住校這件事情的看法，內(nèi)容包括：

1）建議Teddy聽從父親的勸告，并在原文的基礎(chǔ)上補充理由;

2）以你自己的經(jīng)歷支持你的觀點;

3）給Teddy提一些建議。

【寫作要求】

1. 可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

【評分標準】

概括準確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語篇連貫。

Dear Teddy,

 

 

 

 

 

Yours,

Editor Li

 

Answer 1

Dear Teddy,

From your letter, I know that you and your father are having an argument. He wants you to live at school to save more time for your studies, while you prefer to spend your nights at home, arranging your studies and communicating more with your parents.

Both of you are quite reasonable, but personally, I think you should follow your father’s advice. For one thing, with fewer distractions at school than at home, you’ll be more focused on your studies and thus more efficient. For another, without your parents’ help, you’ll have to deal with all kinds of problems all by yourself, which will make you more independent.

I once had a similar experience. I lived at school for three years in junior middle school and I felt it was beneficial to my study as well as my life. During night classes, everyone was quiet and focused. When I came across problems that I couldn’t solve, I could go to the teachers for help in the office. Then there was a 20-minute break when I could go out to enjoy some fresh air and chat with my friends. This drove away my tiredness and made me energetic again.

(As for your argument,)It is my advice that you put aside your opinion and imagine living at school, which will help you make the right decision. I believe it will not only delight your father, but also bring benefits to you.

Yours,

Editor Li

 

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于讀寫任務(wù)寫作，動筆前，一定要認真閱讀原文，并理解內(nèi)容。認真看清題目要求，這篇書面表達給了一段材料：先要求以約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容，要求有很高的概括提煉的能力，要抓住文章的主題，再以約120個詞寫一篇短文，按照要點去表達，不能有遺漏，寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫作時盡量使用自己會的單詞、詞組和句型，同時也要注意使用一些高級語法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。

【亮點說明】范文概括精當(dāng)，觀點明確，不乏好的詞組和句子，如：prefer to；communicate with，focus on，F(xiàn)or one thing … for another …，as well as，be beneficial to；without your parents’ help, you’ll have to deal with all kinds of problems all by yourself, which will make you more independent.這句話用了非限定性定語從句，Then there was a 20-minute break when I could go out to enjoy some fresh air and chat with my friends.這句話用了定語從句。It is my advice that you put aside your opinion and imagine living at school, which will help you make the right decision.這句話用了名詞性從句及定語從句。

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