Question

9．假如你校要舉辦一次主題為"How to Communicate with Friends"的英語演講比賽，請你用英語寫一篇演講稿．要點如下：
1．尊重并信任朋友；  2．常與朋友聊天；  3．換位思考問題．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右，題目已給出；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．參考詞匯：換位思考：put oneself in sb．'s shoes．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
 Friends are the people who can share our happiness and sorrow 朋友是我們可以與之分享快樂和悲傷的人．
高分句型二：
 Don't be rude to them even if they offend you on some occasions 即使有時他們冒犯了你，千萬不要對他們兇．
句型一  who can share our happiness and sorrow  該句是一個由who 引導(dǎo)的定語從句，who在從句中做主語，代替前面的先行詞people
句型二 ①Don't be rude to them 該句是一個祈使句，且此處使用了否定形式 ②even if they offend you on some occasions  該句是一個由even if 引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句

解答 Hello，everyone，I'd like to share with you my ideas about this topic．Friends are the people who can share our happiness and sorrow．（高分句型一） Everyone needs friends to care about，so it's necessary to keep a good relationship with them．（提出論點） Here are my ideas on how to make it easier to communicate with friends．
   In the first place，we should respect and trust our friends．Don't be rude to them even if they offend you on some occasions．（高分句型二） Second，if we often talk with them about our life and  experience，the friendship can be strengthened．Third，if sometimes we don't agree with each other over some minor thins，we should try to put oursleves in their shoes as friendship should be established on understanding each other．（闡述原因）
   Thank you for listening．

點評 該書面表達(dá)為提綱類，該類作文一般規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了寫作要點．考生在寫作時應(yīng)將所列要點用合適的銜接詞合理的聯(lián)系起來，緊密聯(lián)系主題，切忌過于發(fā)散思維．另外再運用準(zhǔn)確的、簡潔明了的語言將文章闡述清楚．